मैं चली मैं चली…!
Posted by Rewa Smriti on April 3, 2009
I was talking on phone and because of the network problem I opened the door and came out of the room. Finished my talk. I felt relaxed. I am happy, excited, completely clear with my feelings and feeling confident of the direction I have chosen. I saw in the sky. When I saw the clear sky full of bright and dim stars that I hadn’t seen for a long time, then I thought of taking a walk!
It was a new moon night. I was silently walking on the street in little moonlight. While walking on the street I was just thinking…a secret smile…a thought of love…a silent wishper that took me closer, and I felt, I am walking with…??…Aahaa…I realized that someone is listening to those silences!
It’s difficult to put in words what has happened to me?…should it happen?…will it really happen?…is it right?…am I just being stupid? No; nothing happend. Don’t worry. Trust me, I am absolutely fine! It is actually a state of my mind, and the wave of my heart is breaking the silence singing the song “मैं चली मैं चली, देखो प्यार की गली, कोई रोके न मुझे, मैं चली मैं चली….!”
Aah!! This is where my words end! You should understand in real sense…I wonder if those words could define my feelings…!
Guess it! 🙂
Turning the wheel... 
Lucky said
😉 ……. I know I banned for it ,but cant resist !!!
Dr.Abhay Kumar said
Hmmm. . . . . Rewa jee,guess kar lia. . . . . But will not say you in this public place. . . . . 🙂 🙂 🙂
mehek said
aare chand raat,sitaron ka saath,aur ishq ki gli se gujarna hua mann ke khayalo ka,hmmm baat hai sunder lekin hum nahi guess kar sake?aap hi keh digiye:)
Rewa Smriti said
@Lucky, chalega! 😉 Thank you.
@Dr. Abhay, you have guessed? I am sure you would have guessed wrong! 🙂
@Mehek, you know it. 😛
Adii said
Sab moh maya hein..
practicing for FLIRTING to some… HAHAHA
just kidding
Rewa Smriti said
@Adii sir,
I am just wise enough to realize my true feelings. Aap mere emotion ka mazak udate ho…hadd hein! Aapki shadi kabhi nahi hone wala shap dun? 😛
rgds.
Adii said
Lagta hein meri sadi nai hone dene me aapka hi haath hein…
aisa kya>>>>????
Anyway….madam read last line also
Hussain said
MaashaAllah, badhai ho
iss mein guess karne ki kya baat hain 🙂
nice way of putting ur feelings, good writer indeed.
hum toe shadi jaroor attend karrenge 🙂
– Hussain
San said
Network problem in Chennai – No way!
Sky & moon light visible in Chennai – No way!!
Did you went to Mysore recently where this song was filmed? If not, take a break. Its lovely place.
Rewa Smriti said
@Adi, are sir aapki shadi hogi…aur ham aapke liye bandi dhundh rahe hein. Tension nahi lene ka…dhundhne ke liye thoda time dijiye 🙂
@Hussain bhai, hmmm…Thank you very much for your comment. Also, thank you so much for your kind compliment.
@San, Achha! Jara reliance use karna. Have you ever visited to any resort in moonlight night in chennai? Kamre mein band rahne se kuch nahi dikhega…bahar niklo Maharaaj 😉
Shashwat said
Call drop! Sab iska kiya dhara hai?
Ruchi said
Beautiful emotions, stated in sweet simple words!!
magar, your words dont end here madam…they should continue in the same sweet flow, vibrant with your hearts truest colors!!
mehek said
ha ha wahi hai laal surkh chehara liya dahakta khilta muskurata lehrata milta hai hawayon mein,:)
Anupam Jha said
Oye kidhar chali? duniya goooooool hai:)
Dr.Abhay Kumar said
Ha. . . Ha. . . 🙂 nobody knows your real love. . . . . Sab naye reader hain islie. . . . . When older will come ,will surely say about your love. . . . . Is it true that love never dies ?If its so ,your love will be forever and i have red that love is not like the bread that can be cat into slices. . . . 🙂
amu said
mera 1st guessing to kahi aur hi ja raha tha but now i understand this emotion is not 4 our……….., but its 4 ur luv palassh.
Apne kitne ache se in flowers ko notice kiya hai warna aaj to log apni busy life me ghar ke bazu wale ko bhi notice nahi karta.reallyyy its very nice.thats why i always want 2 be like u.
Rewa Smriti said
@Shashwat, hmmm…how did you find out about this prob. 😉
@Anupan, ye duniya gol nahi, duniya daamadol hai! 😛
@Mehek, I just want to say a big thank to you for your lovely comments all the time!
Satish Chandra satyarthi said
ma’am, emotions khubsoorat hain. likhne kaa tarikaa khubsoorat hai.
baaki guess-vess kuchh nahi kar sakte. korean padhte padhte dimag me emotions ka achaar bantaa jaa raha hai. aap kaise bacha ke rakh paayin apni creativity. kuchh tips hame bhi dijiye.
kundan said
di ab to public ko ullu banana band karo……bechare sab itni asha lagate hain ki koi to hoga……..
waise maine v guess kar liya hai..[:)]
Amit said
Beautifully expressed. You always bring something fresh. I guess it’s your love ‘Palash’ that guides your spirit.
Nidhi said
Very beautiful post.
Oh gori gori chali kahan,tu chori chori chali kahan,ura key dil chali kahan???????
Palash mil gaya.teenu or key chahiye.ho gai tu balle balle.. 😉
Kiran said
Love is one of the most beautiful emotions ever! This is beautifully written in a few words. Your palash is as beautiful as you are. I wish palash could understand ur emotions. 🙂
Anurag Ranjan Singh said
रिश्तों का रूप बदलता है,
बुनियादें खत्म नहीं होतीं|
ख्वाबों की और उमंगों की,
मियादें खत्म नहीं होतीं|
इक फुल में तेरा रूप बसा,
इक फुल में मेरी जवानी है|
इक चेहरा तेरी निशानी है,
इक चेहरा मेरी निशानी है|
Nidhi said
koe na roko dil key udaan ko,dil wo chalaaaa….
aj fir jeene kei tamannaa hain.
Vishal Prasun said
Well expressed!
Ranjeeta said
Let your emotions flow for ever and may god keep your spirit alive.
anil kant said
खूबसूरत एहसास …बहुत प्यारा लगा
मेरी कलम – मेरी अभिव्यक्ति
Abhiraj said
couldn’t resist commenting – “Behad Lajawab – bahut pyara” articulation of feelings!
Veerendra said
Ise hum kahte hain “khalal hai dimag ka” 😉
उन्मुक्त said
हवायें भी होंठों को चूमती हुई बहुत कुछ कह जाती हैं।
dr vishwas saxena said
–I am fully in line with your poem— yes the feeling can be described as hidden bliss coming out of a lurking needle piercing the body culminating pain to blithe–
—so love is a driving force,isnt it?
Now my querry is if love enables an ordinary man to perform a valiant feat, can heat be used in healing the social groups ailing with violence,terrorism,brutality—cant it be a boon to emancipate this ailing world?
I have some faint memories of a chaupaee of ramayana!saying thatdevi ahilya was emancipated from the course by the very touch of srirams’ feet–Please ponder and perculate it in your poetry too. i know my comment shall be disliked but what to do youngsters like you have to rebuild this world !
rohit said
hello rewa
er kaun mila , kaha chali…..wah wahh wah palash ka rakeeb thund liya kia…yaar
San said
Now I can understand what below line mean for Rewa:
“मैं चली मैं चली”
I admit my wrong understanding in the previous post in this blog. 🙂
Mayank said
Thanks for such a wonderful post. It was a great read.