Let it flow, just flow…
Posted by Rewa Smriti on January 8, 2012
Standing on the street
Remembering a few moments
I looked at eternity
A tear dropped
From my eyes, slowly
Freely, yet silently…
Someone in me says-
Don’t wipe away
Let it flow, just flow…
The tears flow on
Quietly, kissing my lips…
Like drops of dew
Falling from the heaven
Kissing the lonely grasses…
A tinge of missing something
Your presence is felt
I can’t hold back the tears
Looking all around, everywhere
May be you are near…
Suddenly, you whispered~
The diamond drops
They are precious, preserve them
And everything was suddenly ringing!
For me…???
I smiled
And sighed “nah, you are with me!” 🙂
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Turning the wheel... 
taru said
nice di 🙂 new year , new poem, new emotion…. gr8
jitendra kumar said
awsome di…..no word 4 u n ur poem….
just salute u….
ILESH.... said
nice…………..
Abhilesh singh said
Masttt hai
arshad said
nice poem di……………..
drvishwas saxena said
—the persona of beloved mingles in body,his/her sensuality shakes the soul and image films the eye and circles the eye ball!this is the ultimate state of tranced love——–! I too know!!!!! when tears roll out the wet sensation is akin to the presence of this beloved as a soft caress comforting thy departure!this divine feeling is beautifully sketched by you Rewa! Thousands of people pass this stage but few like you can express it so objectively and with a rhythm in every word——-!my best blessings are with you for showering a volley of emotions and architecting ethos of love and eternal beauty.Your poem took me down to a lurking memory of mine of yester years with a flash of MAZAZ saheb’s beautiful Ghazal on the same line saying:
तड़प ए दिल तड़पने से बड़ा आराम आता है,
कि ,हर तड़प के साथ उनका नाम आता है ——–!
my aashirwad to your talent keep it up
Dr Vishwas
nidhi said
nice one rewa….
Shashwat said
Nice post!
Nidhi said
‘The tears flow on
Quietly, kissing my lips…
Like drops of dew
Falling from the heaven
Kissing the lonely grasses…’
Nice poem once again!!!!
it’s realy flow of emotion dat nevr ends.
somtims tears r nt a sign of weakness nd it is enuf 2 make u flow into somthing.so it is best to let d tears flow nd let d emotions flow through ur pen……..
Let me add 2 lines here-
“Lips that taste of tears, they say,
Are the best for kissing.”
-Dorothy Parker
Lopa Sarkar said
I am falling short of words to express how touchy and beautiful your poem is….I am reading this again for the 3rd time and it still feels so fresh to read…..a big salute to you, lady!!
Let your emotions flow like river, let it flow, just flow….
PurpleberryKiss said
“The tears flow on
Quietly, kissing my lips…”
Those lines are amazing! Lovely poem 🙂
VIVEK KUMAR said
Rewa di u poem is jst fblus nd i thnk mre thn awsm.
U knw as far as cncrn abt tears tht it made up of 1% of water nd 99% of feelings.
Shalini Priyadarshini said
i hv no wrds to expln
kitne creative ho aaplog
rishi bala said
nyc poem bhabhi…. :))
Kunal Kumar said
The tears flow on
Quietly, kissing my lips…
Amazing! No words, I’m simply speechless.