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चुपके से चली आऊँगी!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on June 3, 2009

चेहरे पर शिकन तक ना देख पाओगे,
हल्की फुहारों में जब भींगती चली आऊंगी!

तेरे बज़्म में है ज़न्नत, तुम ये समझ पाओगे,
सबसे नज़र बचाके जब भागती चली आऊंगी!

सुलझे रिश्तों के धागे को, यूँ ना उलझा पाओगे,
असलियत बयाँ करने जब हर बार चली आऊँगी!

बहते आँसू में दबी दर्द को, तुम ना पहचान पाओगे,
पिघलती बर्फ की चादर जब ओढ़ती चली आऊँगी!

चाँद की चाँदनी में बैठ, मुझे ना आज़मा पाओगे,
गुमसुम बैठा चाँद के साथ जब चुपके से चली आऊँगी!

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19 Responses to “चुपके से चली आऊँगी!”

  1. rohit said

    hi Rewa
    lovely poem .. sahi me tum kafi badia likhti ho…..
    सुलझे रिश्तों के धागे को, यूँ ना उलझा पाओगे,
    असलियत बयाँ करने जब हर बार चली आऊँगी
    rishto ko hi uljata raha hai insaan har baar

    chota jeevan, per uljaan badi.
    asliyaat sabke samne ho to uljaan sulaj jaye
    per har insaan aajakal uljaan ko badta hi jaa raha hai…
    ……………

  2. M Verma said

    अच्छी रचना
    बधाई

  3. nidhi said

    बहते आँसू में दबी दर्द को, तुम ना पहचान पाओगे,
    पिघलती बर्फ की चादर जब ओढ़ती चली आऊँगी!

    चाँद की चाँदनी में बैठ, मुझे ना आज़मा पाओगे,
    गुमसुम बैठा चाँद के साथ जब चुपके से चली आऊँगी!

    a vry nice nd b’ful poem.
    heart tuching..thnkuji fr a lovly poem frm a sharp nd b’ful mind.

    happy birth day to U!! 🙂

  4. anupam jha said

    All the best! its been more than one year since i wrote the 1st comment on your blog!happy b day….and for everything you are goin to witness in the coming days! I m a die hard fan of your poems!!

  5. Abhiraj Anand said

    very nice 🙂

  6. Abhiraj Anand said

    Happy birthday to you again..hope u had a nice day 🙂

  7. anil kant said

    bahut achchhi lagi aapki rachna…

  8. बहुत सुन्दर रचना है।बधाई।

  9. rishibala said

    kidher jaane ka iraada hai?
    ;-p

  10. Dear author
    an excellent and very brave depiction of feelings.Perhaps now you have attained those heights which I think you very well deserve in your poetry.I right from the very begning sensed a spark in your sparkling poetry and haunt to view its zenith point.Today I very confidently declare that you are the best poet now in the ongoing websites i daily browse.Yes surviving with a smile the pain of parting love yet not succumbing or complaining for is the essence of this memorable poem of yours .i really wish to see this approach in the youngsters of this millenium.I am so happy that you have initiated this new treck.I bless you to be a pioneer of this school of thought.With my profound appreciation to you and all the very best for your forthcoming life
    Dr Vishwas Saxena

  11. paavanj said

    Respected Rewa,

    After read your effective post,

    Just want to say that”Very interesting & well written article !“.

    Health Care Tips | Health Fitness Tips | Fitness Tips | Somnath Temple
    Best of Luck for your next posting!!

    -God Bless You….

  12. mehek said

    चाँद की चाँदनी में बैठ, मुझे ना आज़मा पाओगे,
    गुमसुम बैठा चाँद के साथ जब चुपके से चली आऊँगी!

    waah rews kya gazab ka andaaz hai,bahut dino baad dil khish kar diya.behad sunder.

  13. Shrikant said

    it was nice rewa..really nice..keep it up and do compile all these poems !!

  14. Santosh K Singh said

    I feel its real presentation of my life. realy very nice.

  15. Racial Profiling ?? said

    Good Poem!!

  16. TARU said

    HI….. REWA DI….. CAN I SAY U DIIIIII…….?FI YES “REWA DI REALLY UR POEM IS SOOOOOOOOOO NICE.
    LOVE UR POEM DII….

  17. Bunty said

    Dil Bahut Udas Hai Dard Ab Saha Nahi Jata,
    Yakeen Karo Tumhare Bina Ab Raha Nahi Jata.

  18. Loved this poem
    Became a fan of yours

  19. Rina said

    I have been reading out a few of your stories and i must say pretty clever stuff. I will make sure to bookmark your site.

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