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…..when the blue water plays with the shore to tell something…..

कायल हूँ…!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on November 23, 2008

कुछ बातें
मेरी तुम्हें
कभी – कभी
नाराज़ करती
पर गुस्साते नही,
क्यूँ भला ?
 
क्या यूँ ही,
इसी तरह से
मुस्कुराते हुए
तुम सब पर
अपनी नाराज़गी
जाहिर करते हो?

या मुझ पर
अपना हक़ समझ
बिना झुँझलाए
निस्संकोच होकर,
मन की बात
प्यारे अल्फाज़ में
व्यक़्त करते हो!

वाह! बहुत ख़ूब
कुछ भी कह लो
मैं तुम्हारी
इन्हीं अदाओं की
हमेशा कायल हूँ…!

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18 Responses to “कायल हूँ…!”

  1. anupam said

    kya kahoon? bolo? amazing,brilliant,fantafabulous,impeccable,exemplary,vocab is so poor else i would have wrritten all the beautiful words in praise to the above ditty!

  2. Will say later. . . . Not yet. . .

  3. mehek said

    वाह! बहुत ख़ूब
    कुछ भी कह लो
    मैं तुम्हारी
    इन्हीं अदाओं की
    हमेशा कायल हूँ…!

    aji aap unpe kayal hue to hue hum to aapke andaaz e bayan pe mare ja rahe hai,waah kya baat hai,koi naarazgi nahi muskurake kehta hai,inhi adaon mein aaj kal palash khilta hai:):)

  4. amu said

    hum bhi to aapke likhne ki inhi aadao ke kayal hain. bahut hi khubsurat ulfaaz.

  5. संगीता पुरी said

    बहुत सुंदर।

  6. Nidhi said

    या मुझ पर
    अपना हक़ समझ
    बिना झुँझलाए
    निस्संकोच होकर,
    मन की बात
    प्यारे अल्फाज़ में
    व्यक़्त करते हो!

    Absolutely brilliant.
    its nt at al simple to sit nd pen down d true feelings into a poem.whenever i read ur poems i put myself into it nd its like m speaking fr myself.

  7. Nidhi said

    Truely speaking 🙂

    मैं तुम्हारी
    इन्हीं अदाओं की
    हमेशा कायल हूँ…!

  8. Nice one, But we are 3rd person for this poem, So could not understand well the feelings behind it. May be if same happens with me in future, I can feel it.

  9. Kiran said

    नाराज़ करती
    पर गुस्साते नही,
    क्यूँ भला ?

    Awesome. Behold, you know the answer 😉

  10. Bahut khub.

  11. Sandesh said

    nice poem again …… 🙂

    मैंने देखा हैं सागर में भीगे सूरज को नहाते हुए
    उसी गुम्बद पर, जहा मेरा घर था ,तारो को बतियातें हुए ,
    वहां हवा भी आकर बहुत इठलाती थी
    दामन में अपने ,सात समुंदर की खुशबु भर लाती थी ….

    http://www.sandesh.co.nr

  12. Ami said

    ek gana yaad aa gaya di isse baat pet

    “tumne mujhe dekha ho kar meharba “

  13. rohit said

    where is rewa?/////////////////////////where is rewa ………………..is she angry? where is she ? ntng new from long time…………where are you rewa??????????????????????????????????????

  14. @Rohit,

    I am here only boss! Why should I get angry? Actually I was out of station for few days. 🙂

    rgds.

  15. bahut badhiya hai. likhate raho.

  16. Hi Friends,

    Thanks a lot to each one of you for your kind words and appreciation.

    rgds.

  17. sajal said

    ye style,chhoti chhoti lines use karne ka,bahut log achha use kar rahe hai aajkal…ye bhi unme se ek rachna hai…nice

  18. ani raj said

    jagaya unhone aisa k aaj tak soo na sake, rulaya unhone aisa k kisi ke samne roo na sake, jane kya baat hai unme jab se mana unhe aapna tab se kisi ke ho na sake ……….

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