कदम लड़खड़ाए!
Posted by Rewa Smriti on September 28, 2008
ज़माने ने आज़मा लिया भरी महफ़िल में
एक आह तक ना निकली और तुम रो पड़े!
ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े!
Turning the wheel…
…..when the blue water plays with the shore to tell something…..
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mehek said
ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े!
sahi kaha rews,jara si thokar lagi aur hum ladkhada jate hai,bahut sundar saachi baat.zamane ko aazmane do ,us mein se kuch sikhne milega aur ladhane ki takat milegi.
Rewa Smriti said
@Mehek, thank you so much for your lovely words!
Nidhi said
ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े!
Wah Wah.Bahut khoob !!!
kisi ne khoob kaha hai woh jo bole to unke kahe har lafz sey khushboo aye.
Arz hain:
Ghubaar-e-rahguzar kaa ye hauslaa bhii to dekh
havaa-e-taazaa! tere saath chal rahaa hun mai
Nidhi said
1 more:
ranjish hii sahii dil hii dukhaane ke liye aa
aa phir se mujhe chhor ke jaane ke liye aa
रौशन said
जमाना आजमाता है तो ऐसे ही भरी महफिलों में
और रोना पड़ जाता है छुपा के
सुंदर पंक्तियाँ
Sangeeta said
एक आह तक ना निकली और तुम रो पड़े!
Nice one!
vijaya smriti said
ज़माने ने आज़मा लिया भरी महफ़िल में
एक आह तक ना निकली और तुम रो पड़े!
ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े!
mujhe dono hi panktiyan bahut acchi lagi.isaliye maine dono hi daal diya.bahut sahi baat likhi hai.jo insaan bilku, determined hoker kaam nahi kerta ye jinke will power kamjor hote hain, kabhi bhi apni manzil tak nahi pahunch paati.
hamae aatm vishwas hona chahiye,tabhi hum apani manzil ko paa sakenge, kyunkii jamana her kadam hamari pariksha leta hai
Razia mirza said
ज़माने ने आज़मा लिया भरी महफ़िल में
एक आह तक ना निकली और तुम रो पड़े!
wah! kya haqiqat dikhlaadi hai, Revajee aapne!
Rewa Smriti said
@Nidhi, thank you dear for appreciating the poem. Aapki lafzon mein bhi kuch anokhi baat hai. 😉
Tu meri khamoshiyon ka saaz hai
Teri lafzon mein meri aawaaz hai
@Roushan, Zamane ko haq hai azmane ka, ajmane do! Hmmm…sahi baat hai waise bhi chupkar rone mein jyada sakun milta hai. 🙂
Vishal said
ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े!
Bahut he sundar.
Vishal said
Din ka har Lamha Khushi de aapko,
Jahan gum ki hawa chu ke bhi na gujare,
Khuda woh Jannat si Zamin de aapko.
rohit said
Hi Rewa…
Kaffi dino baad ayay or paya ek or motio ki ladi….
ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े
Best Yaar.
Yeh Sawal kai baar poochti hai zindgi…
rohit
Nidhi said
jin raaston par tere kadam ho
manjil hai meri vahaan.
duniya se keh do na hamko pukaare,
ham kho gaye hain yahaan.
anupam said
office se bhi blogging.sahi hai.waise post kafi heavy hai!
Amu said
ye jindagi ki hakikat bhi kuch aisi hi hai jaane kab kis raah pe kidhar jane ko bol de, hum to bas bebas se usi raah pe chal padte hain.
Rewa Smriti said
@Sangeeta, thank you so much for liking it!
@Vijaya, bilkul sahi kaha hai. Bachchi bahut samajhdar ho gayi hai, isliye ajkal samajhdari ki baaten karne lagi hai. Love you dear…Take care of your health and get well soon.
@Razia, hmmm…kya karen kabhi kabhi keyboard bhi haqiqat byan karne lagti hai. Shukriya for your lovely words.
dr vishwas saxena said
I am so glad that in this fast mechanising world daring people like you exist, who are able to keep alive the humane values so nicely.I request you to revive the campaign of poetry and use it as a tool for social mobilisation.Kavita ko kripya khali nidanatamak hi na banaein balki iss rugna samaj ka upchar kane hetu rasta bhi darshaein.mujhe pata ki mein aap say durgam karye ki apeksha kur raha hoon per kya karu mujhe aap ki pankteeyon may bootiyan bhi nazar aaeen hein.all the best
Dr Vishwas saxena
dr vishwas saxena said
I am so glad that in this fast mechanising world daring people like you exist, who are able to keep alive the human values so nicely.I request you to revive the campaign of poetry and use it as a tool for social mobilisation.Kavita ko kripya khali nidanatamak hi na banaein balki iss rugna samaj ka upchar kane hetu rasta bhi darshaein.mujhe pata ki mein aap say durgam karye ki apeksha kur raha hoon per kya karu mujhe aap ki pankteeyon may bootiyan bhi nazar aaeen hein.all the best
Dr Vishwas saxena
dr vishwas saxena said
well I know you only by your poetry and info given in your website which I feel is quite suffecient.I would like to respond/reinforce your poem entitled “benaam rishtey” by my self composed poem written in Roman script[sorry I am unable to type in hindi].The title is ‘Shayad issi liye bana hoon mein’
Tapish say bhari dhara per,ambuj ka chalawa hi sahi,
Per doobti aaso ka nirbal asra to hoon mein
meri vaidna chitkar ko ger tum warid ki garjna samjh lo to kya galat hay!
tum say adhik jalkar,tum say adhik tap ker ban dhoomra sa uttha hoon mein!
kal mein baras kar nasht ho jaonga
aur de jaoonga NAVPRERNA,NAVCHETNA VA NAVJEEVAN
—shayad issi liye bana hoon mein
Dr vishwas saxena
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