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कदम लड़खड़ाए!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on September 28, 2008

ज़माने ने आज़मा लिया भरी महफ़िल में
एक आह तक ना निकली और तुम रो पड़े!

ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े!

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19 Responses to “कदम लड़खड़ाए!”

  1. mehek said

    ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
    क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े!

    sahi kaha rews,jara si thokar lagi aur hum ladkhada jate hai,bahut sundar saachi baat.zamane ko aazmane do ,us mein se kuch sikhne milega aur ladhane ki takat milegi.

  2. @Mehek, thank you so much for your lovely words!

  3. Nidhi said

    ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
    क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े!

    Wah Wah.Bahut khoob !!!
    kisi ne khoob kaha hai woh jo bole to unke kahe har lafz sey khushboo aye.

    Arz hain:
    Ghubaar-e-rahguzar kaa ye hauslaa bhii to dekh
    havaa-e-taazaa! tere saath chal rahaa hun mai

  4. Nidhi said

    1 more:

    ranjish hii sahii dil hii dukhaane ke liye aa
    aa phir se mujhe chhor ke jaane ke liye aa

  5. जमाना आजमाता है तो ऐसे ही भरी महफिलों में
    और रोना पड़ जाता है छुपा के
    सुंदर पंक्तियाँ

  6. Sangeeta said

    एक आह तक ना निकली और तुम रो पड़े!

    Nice one!

  7. ज़माने ने आज़मा लिया भरी महफ़िल में
    एक आह तक ना निकली और तुम रो पड़े!

    ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
    क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े!

    mujhe dono hi panktiyan bahut acchi lagi.isaliye maine dono hi daal diya.bahut sahi baat likhi hai.jo insaan bilku, determined hoker kaam nahi kerta ye jinke will power kamjor hote hain, kabhi bhi apni manzil tak nahi pahunch paati.
    hamae aatm vishwas hona chahiye,tabhi hum apani manzil ko paa sakenge, kyunkii jamana her kadam hamari pariksha leta hai

  8. ज़माने ने आज़मा लिया भरी महफ़िल में
    एक आह तक ना निकली और तुम रो पड़े!
    wah! kya haqiqat dikhlaadi hai, Revajee aapne!

  9. @Nidhi, thank you dear for appreciating the poem. Aapki lafzon mein bhi kuch anokhi baat hai. 😉

    Tu meri khamoshiyon ka saaz hai
    Teri lafzon mein meri aawaaz hai

    @Roushan, Zamane ko haq hai azmane ka, ajmane do! Hmmm…sahi baat hai waise bhi chupkar rone mein jyada sakun milta hai. 🙂

  10. Vishal said

    ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
    क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े!

    Bahut he sundar.

  11. Vishal said

    Din ka har Lamha Khushi de aapko,
    Jahan gum ki hawa chu ke bhi na gujare,
    Khuda woh Jannat si Zamin de aapko.

  12. rohit said

    Hi Rewa…
    Kaffi dino baad ayay or paya ek or motio ki ladi….

    ज़िंदगी भी पूछ बैठी आज इस मोड़ पर
    क्यूँ बीच राह में यूँ तेरे कदम लड़खड़ा पड़े
    Best Yaar.
    Yeh Sawal kai baar poochti hai zindgi…
    rohit

  13. Nidhi said

    jin raaston par tere kadam ho
    manjil hai meri vahaan.
    duniya se keh do na hamko pukaare,
    ham kho gaye hain yahaan.

  14. anupam said

    office se bhi blogging.sahi hai.waise post kafi heavy hai!

  15. Amu said

    ye jindagi ki hakikat bhi kuch aisi hi hai jaane kab kis raah pe kidhar jane ko bol de, hum to bas bebas se usi raah pe chal padte hain.

  16. @Sangeeta, thank you so much for liking it!

    @Vijaya, bilkul sahi kaha hai. Bachchi bahut samajhdar ho gayi hai, isliye ajkal samajhdari ki baaten karne lagi hai. Love you dear…Take care of your health and get well soon.

    @Razia, hmmm…kya karen kabhi kabhi keyboard bhi haqiqat byan karne lagti hai. Shukriya for your lovely words.

  17. dr vishwas saxena said

    I am so glad that in this fast mechanising world daring people like you exist, who are able to keep alive the humane values so nicely.I request you to revive the campaign of poetry and use it as a tool for social mobilisation.Kavita ko kripya khali nidanatamak hi na banaein balki iss rugna samaj ka upchar kane hetu rasta bhi darshaein.mujhe pata ki mein aap say durgam karye ki apeksha kur raha hoon per kya karu mujhe aap ki pankteeyon may bootiyan bhi nazar aaeen hein.all the best
    Dr Vishwas saxena

  18. dr vishwas saxena said

    I am so glad that in this fast mechanising world daring people like you exist, who are able to keep alive the human values so nicely.I request you to revive the campaign of poetry and use it as a tool for social mobilisation.Kavita ko kripya khali nidanatamak hi na banaein balki iss rugna samaj ka upchar kane hetu rasta bhi darshaein.mujhe pata ki mein aap say durgam karye ki apeksha kur raha hoon per kya karu mujhe aap ki pankteeyon may bootiyan bhi nazar aaeen hein.all the best
    Dr Vishwas saxena

  19. dr vishwas saxena said

    well I know you only by your poetry and info given in your website which I feel is quite suffecient.I would like to respond/reinforce your poem entitled “benaam rishtey” by my self composed poem written in Roman script[sorry I am unable to type in hindi].The title is ‘Shayad issi liye bana hoon mein’
    Tapish say bhari dhara per,ambuj ka chalawa hi sahi,
    Per doobti aaso ka nirbal asra to hoon mein
    meri vaidna chitkar ko ger tum warid ki garjna samjh lo to kya galat hay!
    tum say adhik jalkar,tum say adhik tap ker ban dhoomra sa uttha hoon mein!
    kal mein baras kar nasht ho jaonga
    aur de jaoonga NAVPRERNA,NAVCHETNA VA NAVJEEVAN
    —shayad issi liye bana hoon mein
    Dr vishwas saxena
    09414550982

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