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मैं बहुत सीधी हूँ !

Posted by Rewa Smriti on May 5, 2008

मैं बहुत सीधी हूँ,
मुझे जलेबी ना समझना
इमरती समझोगे बुरा होगा
भूलकर भी चाइनीज़ नूडल्स समझ
मेरे सीधेपन को अबला कहकर,
हद की सीमा पार ना करना!

देखो मैं बहुत सीधी तो हूँ,
इसे मेरी कमज़ोरी ना समझना
सीधा होना कोई बेवकूफी नही
सीधेपन को नादानी ना समझना
वरना मेरे सीधेपन से बना,
सब्र का बाँध टूट जाएगा!

सीधी हूँ, सबला भी हूँ,
बिन ढक्कन का डब्बा ना समझना
कुछ सीमाएँ हें मेरे सीधेपन की
बस इतना सोच लो और संभल जाओ,
मुझे उल्लू समझने की नासमझी ना करना!

फिर भी हाल-ए-दिल बयाँ करती हूँ,
वाक़ई मैं बहुत ही सीधी हूँ! 🙂

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42 Responses to “मैं बहुत सीधी हूँ !”

  1. mehek said

    🙂 🙂 😉 jalebi,imaraati,chinese sare hamare man pasand,hmm aur aap bhi rews 🙂 🙂 bahut hi badhiya,mazedar,aap siddhi rahe ya jalebi,sabla jarur rahe,bayan karne ka andaz bahut khubsurat,nazar na lage kisi ki 🙂 🙂

  2. vakai seedhi hai…

  3. Shubh said

    Really liked this poem. You are seedhi like a cow 🙂

  4. @Mehek, I just love reading your comments. हाय, मैं मर जावां गुड़ खा के, सच में! 😉 Shukriya dr. sahiba!

    @Anurag, thank you dr. sahab! 🙂

    @Shubh, cow mata to bahut bahut seedhi hoti hai….mujhe cow bana diya…aur gaon ki yaad bhi dila diye…chalo shukriya bcoz I love cow very much. 🙂

    rgds.

  5. Ek Ajnabi said

    सीधी हूँ, सबला भी हूँ,
    बिन ढक्कन का डब्बा ना समझना
    कुछ सीमाएँ हें मेरे सीधेपन की
    बस इतना सोच लो और संभल जाओ,
    मुझे उल्लू समझने की नासमझी ना करना!

    Bahut sundarta se ye darshaya hai aapne
    apne seedhepan ka ehsaas karaya hai aapne
    madira-e-rachna ka ghuunt pilaya hai aapne
    dhanya hai-hum seedhepan se milaya hai aapne
    sochne aur sambhlne ka jor jataya hai aapne
    kisi ko bhi kabhi nehin sataya hai aapne
    seedhepan mein bahut-kuch farmaya hai aapne
    haal-e-byan dilse unka khyal laya hai aapne
    *
    khuda kare aapka-seedhapan rahe havi unki har baat mein
    aur aapki-saadgi ki ho chracha unki yadon ki barat mein

    Keep Smiling Always

    ye ishq nehi aasaan……….

    Ek Ajnabi

  6. Tanu Shree said

    Diiiiiiiiiiiiiii m sosorry…mai late ho gayi..par dekhiye daudte daudte……. aa hi gayiiii ….. …..

    Ek min thoda sa rest kar lu….
    Ek min ab zara dhyaaan se padh to luu aise hi comment thode kar dungi….

    Arre ruko yaar dnt distrb …

    mmmmmmm ..waah waah ..
    Waah …

    Hmmmm padh lii poori… ab likhun kuch accha saa. ..

    To arz hai Bhaiyon aur Behno apni pyaar si “seedhi-saadi”Rewa di ke liye….

    Dear Di …hume pata to tha aap sidhi hai …par haan calculative aspects aaj pata chale 😛 ….Neither Jalebi nor noodles …. not a bin dhakkan ka dabba…hmm Maamla serious hai bhai….

    Di ab bata dijiye is poem me aap daraa rahi hai yaa sirf bata rahi hai…hehhehehheheheh 😛 ..

    I knw di watever u wish to convey…so “Bhool chook maaf”!!

    Luv U!!

  7. Amit said

    कुछ सीमाएँ हें मेरे सीधेपन की
    बस इतना सोच लो और संभल जाओ,

    Bhaut khub.
    kudiyon ka hai zamana bhai log ab bhee waqt hain sambhal jao. 🙂

  8. Nidhi said

    बस इतना सोच लो और संभल जाओ,
    मुझे उल्लू समझने की नासमझी ना करना!

    wahhhh wahhhh! kya khub kaha hay.
    oye oye ye nagar hai kudiyon da yahaan saans v ley sambhal kar 😉

  9. Anupam Jha said

    Seedhi? U mean straight like a lamp post? coconut tree? samjha main nahi ata aap bahut *Confusing Language likh te ho*.

  10. sidhi hun par bewkuph nahi
    sachi hun par kamjor nahi

    sahi hai na………………………..

  11. @Ek Ajnabi, well written! I really liked last two lines very much, Shukriya.

    @Tanu, aaram se betu gir jayegi! Main to pata nahi kaisi hun but itna janti hun ki meri betu bahut pyari hai. Hmmm…meri itni himmat jo kisi ko daraun….nope, kisi ko nahi dara rahi. Waise kuch insan ke liye isare hi kafi hote hein…hai na betu? Ohho…cab aa gayi…ab jana hoga, so give me a break dear 🙂

    @Amit, aisi koi baat nahi hai, daro nahi. Thank you for your lovely comment.

    @Nidhi, oh god! Yeh kya Miss Senorita, let them take breath freely, ok.

    @Anupam, coconut tree…lamp post…hehehe…very funny. 😆 Haan…yahan sirf yeh hi dikhta hai charo taraf. Ohho isme confusing language kuch bhi to nahi hai.

    @Amu, I love to read your comment after a small gap dear. Really was missing you. Hmmm… sach hun per ham kamjore to bilkul bhi nahi.

  12. Akhilesh Kumar said

    Nice poem. and nice comments too 🙂

  13. Hi Akhilesh, thank you so much for appreciating my poem as well as comments. In fact I am enjoying to read all the comments. All of them are lovely!

  14. Ek Ajnabi said

    *
    @Ek Ajnabi, well written! I really liked last two lines very much, Shukriya.
    *
    hum shukr guzar hain aapne hosla badhaya humara
    aapki har pankti dilnashin hai ye kehna hai humara
    bahut logo ko hai aasha aur unko hai aapka sahara
    aapke seedhepan mein hai pyar unke liye bahut sara
    khuda dekh raha hai usko v aapka deedar nehi gavara
    deepak-ye-asha ka jalta rahe chamakta rahe ye sitara

    kabhi kisi roz yun hi chaand ne chandni ko ye pukara
    khhubsuurat hote hain seedhe dil inka hai apna nazara
    to chaandni ne josh mein aakar chaand ko aise nihara

    “tujh pe luta duun ye zindagi pyar amar hai humara
    aur mujhe kya chahiye zanmon ka saath jo hai tumhara!”

    Keep Smiling Always

    Ye ishq nehi asan……

    Ek Ajnabi

  15. TArun said

    arre itni sweets ..sab khane ka dil kar gaya ..
    nice sweets in nice poem.
    -tarun

  16. rohit said

    hi rewa,
    bahut sidi ho yeh jaan ker bahut laga
    imrati nahi ho, chines nuddle nahi ho…
    indian saviya to ho

    abla nahi ho tabla ho

    सीधा होना कोई बेवकूफी नही
    सीधेपन को नादानी ना समझना
    nadaan to nahi ho, sabko pata hai

    सीधी हूँ, सबला भी हूँ,
    बिन ढक्कन का डब्बा ना समझना
    bin dhakan ka dhabba nahi ho
    maloom chala….dhakan wali dhabba ho

    कुछ सीमाएँ हें मेरे सीधेपन की
    बस इतना सोच लो और संभल जाओ,
    मुझे उल्लू समझने की नासमझी ना करना!
    owl to admi hota hai
    devi laxmi ke nichye hota hai

    फिर भी हाल-ए-दिल बयाँ करती हूँ,
    वाक़ई मैं बहुत ही सीधी हूँ!
    sahi me tum siddhi ho
    bilkul siddi

    ek kavita achi lagai,,TUMHARA PYARE….itne din me ek hi …. socha tha kafi kuch likha hoga….
    rohit

  17. kmuskan said

    सीधी हूँ, सबला भी हूँ,
    बिन ढक्कन का डब्बा ना समझना
    कुछ सीमाएँ हें मेरे सीधेपन की
    बस इतना सोच लो और संभल जाओ,
    मुझे उल्लू समझने की नासमझी ना करना!

    फिर भी हाल-ए-दिल बयाँ करती हूँ,
    वाक़ई मैं बहुत ही सीधी हूँ! 🙂

    bahut aacha .kavita kahne ka andaaz aacha laga

  18. menka said

    sach me kavita bhi sidhi hai,,, [:)]achha likha hai aapne .

  19. ashish kumar ranjan said

    hi , good poem, di

  20. mayz said

    itni seedhi kavita…poori sar ke upar se nikal gayi…
    all i understood was jalebi, noodles, imarti…now m kinda hungry 😛

  21. @Tarun, thank you very much for writing the sweet words for my poem.

    @Rohit, shukriya, ji nahi! Main sevaiya bhi nahi hun, waise ladki ghar ki lakshmi hoti hai, yani devi 🙂

    @Muskan, welcome to my small world. I am happy to see your comment here, thanks a lot.

    @Menka, shukriya! I too visited your blog, aap bhi kafi achha likhti hein.

  22. @Ashish, hmmm…You are most welcome on my blog and thank you very much for liking my poem.

    @Mayz, dhyan se nahi padhne per koi bhi baaten sir ke upper se hi niklegi. Mithai ke name per to mujhe bhi bhukh lag jati hai. By the way what’s the meaning of Mayz?

  23. mayz said

    datz my nick…short for mayank

  24. Jitender Singh said

    फिर भी हाल-ए-दिल बयाँ करती हूँ,
    वाक़ई मैं बहुत ही सीधी हूँ!..sach mein yaar u r very innocent aakhir dost kiske ho hehe. vaise ye poem tumne bahut achi likhi hai. Really you deserve praise for your this particular creation. Keep on turning the wheel….with the patterns of the blue waters….gr8 keep it up…tumhari poem par ke mujhe ye gana yaad aa gaya:

    wo chand khila wo taare hase ye raat ajab matwari hai
    samjhne waale samjh gaye hain naa samjhe wo anari hai…..

    regds
    Jitender Singh

  25. rohit said

    ghar ki laxmi to tumhri dusri kavita pad ker yaad aaie, title bhale kuch ho, kher, chalo jo bhi ho ..achi ho
    rohit

  26. ami said

    AAp to sach mein bahut seedhi hoo 🙂

    best to say ACHHI SISTER HO aap

  27. Jitender Singh said

    बिन ढक्कन का डब्बा ना समझना…..

    aise thori hota hai…..

    rgds
    Jitender Singh

  28. @Mayz, ok! thanks for knowing it.

    @Jitender, shukriya for your lovely words. By the way apne muh miyan mitthoo kyun ban rahe ho? Hmmm….samjhne wale smajh gaye jo na smajhe wo anari hai…so dost tum bhi bhali bhanti samjh jao 😉

    @Rohit, koun si kavita padhkar yaad aai? koi nahi, shukriya kam se kam yaad to aai, warna aajkal to logon ko yaad dilana hota hai ki ladki ghar ki lakshmi hoti hai 🙂

    @Ami, thank you AMI for giving such a beautiful credit. thnx brother.

    @Jitender urf Sonu ji, yun hi dheere se bolkar chupke se nikal jao, aise thori hota hai!

  29. Prem Piyush said

    Nahi nahi we wouldn’t take you as Ullu 😛

    But finding you somewhere near to Chinese Noodles. – as they are entangled within, so the poems seems entangled. Because sidhe log yeh nahi kehte ‘yeh kahoge to bura hoga, woh kahoge to bura hoga at the same time warning others to be careful’ .

    Though the poem is funny, but on a serious note, I would rather say there is some immaturity / innocence in your writing still – that makes you Sidha.

  30. @Prem Piyush,

    सर जी सीधे लोग ही सचेत करते हें! टेढ़े लोग तो सिर्फ़ दूसरे के बातों को पकड़ते हें, और बड़ी समझदारी से शब्दों से हमला करते हें. जैसे ब्लॉग जगत में टेढ़े लोग शब्‍द जाल फेंक कर बस दूसरों पर ताना मारते हें. सब वक़्त का कमाल है, ठीक कहा ना सर जी? शुक्रिया…! 🙂

    rgds.

  31. Ek Ajnabi said

    “टेढ़े लोग तो सिर्फ़ दूसरे के बातों को पकड़ते हें, और बड़ी समझदारी से शब्दों से हमला करते हें”
    is bar bhi bilkul sahi farmaya hai aapne.
    fir se seedhepan ka ehsas dilaya hai aapne!

    Keep Smiling Always

    Ek Ajnabi

  32. rohit said

    rewa
    tumhari hi pachaan hu, wali kavita me …. tumhe likha to tah
    rohit

  33. Manish said

    Rewa,

    Nice one 😛 Muh me pani aa gaya

  34. Haan ji, Bilkul thik kaha. Bahut ‘Sidhe’ style mein. 🙂

  35. @Rohit, ok! got it. Thanks

    @Manish, First of all welcome you @ my blog. I express my thanks to you for writing and appreciating my poem!

    @Premsir, hehehe…aapse hi sikha hai 😛

  36. जमी नहीं रेवाजी… आपकी काबिलियत से कोसों दूर की लगी। एकदम सस्ते शेर की मानिंद..
    😦

  37. हां रेवा जी आप की ये रचना बडी ही सीधी है.मै लीखना चाहुंगी।आपकी रचना में कुछ अपने अल्फ़ाज जोडकर कि…
    में सीधी हुं “मक़डी के उस ज़ाल” की तरहां अगर भूले से भी आ गये उलज़ जाओगे ! सही है? रेवाजी?

  38. @सागर जी, कोई बात नही….कभी-कभी सस्ते से ही संतुष्ट कीजिए! वैसे मैं जमाने के लिए नही लिखती हूँ बस जो दिल में आता है वो यहाँ डाल देती हूँ इसलिए आप दुखी मत होइए. शुक्रिया यहाँ आने के लिए and smile plz. 🙂

    @Raziaji, सबसे पहले मैं आपका स्वागत करती हूँ! आपको यहाँ देख काफ़ी खुशी हुई, बहुत खूब लिखा है आपने…hmmm…”मक़डी के उस ज़ाल” की तरह….Shukriya for your lovely line!

  39. Amit said

    Sach me dost mujhe apki ye kavita bahut achhi lagi..main to mumbai me rehta hoon aur job karta hoon time pass nahi ho raha tha to maine computer chalu kiya aur mujhe search karne par ye website mili is maine padha mujhe bahut achha laga..mujhe nahi pata tha ki hamare rewa mki bhi ladkiya mumbai ki ladkiyon se pichhe nahi hai…main bhi rewa ka hoon..aur har 2-3 months me ek baar rewa aata hoon..ho sakega to hum aapse jaroor milenge..mera email id amit.tiwari59@yahoo.co.in ..agar achha lage to contact kar lijiyega..
    BY SEE YOU AGAIN..

  40. Hi Amit,

    Thank you so much for taking time to visit my space and also thanks a lot for being a part of this blog. It’s really nice to read your comment here.

    One thing, actually my name is रेवा, but I am not from रीवा. Amit, Mumbai mein rahne wale logon mein se bahut aise log hein jo wahan village ya chote shahron se aaye hein aur wo kisi bhi mamle mein kisi se kam nahi hein. 🙂

    rgds.

  41. naresh shrivatav said

    hyyy you are very smart girl , good girl and take care

  42. Mayank said

    Thanks for such a wonderful post. It was a great read.

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