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बार-बार क्यूँ आते हो…!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on March 14, 2008

तुम आते हो,
आकर चले जाते हो,
बस यह कहकर कि
मंज़िल अपनी अलग है,
मैं पूछती हूँ तुमसे
इसबार बता दो,
तुम आख़िर लौट कर
बार-बार क्यूँ आते हो?

इतना जानती हूँ,
तुम ख़ुद को
नही संभाल पाओगे,
ना मिलूंगी तो,
वक़्त के चंगुल में फस
बेचैन हो जाओगे!

यह कैसा पागलपन है,
सपने इस दिल में बुन
ख़ुद ही तोड़ते हो,
फिर चिल्लाते हो
मुझे ना रोको,
मान लो इसबार 
बस एकबार,
आलिंगन कर लेने दो!

*************

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40 Responses to “बार-बार क्यूँ आते हो…!”

  1. Ek Ajnabi said

    तुम आते हो,
    आकर चले जाते हो,
    बस यह कहकर कि
    मंज़िल अपनी अलग है,
    मैं पूछती हूँ तुमसे
    इसबार बता दो,
    तुम आख़िर लौट कर
    बार-बार क्यूँ आते हो?

    bahut khuub …this time seems that the writer has expressed the real feelings ….gr8

    yaad aati hai to hum is dil ko rok lete hain ,
    aanchal na mile to ashq haathon se ponch lete hain ,
    marham na mila to zakhmon ko bahne dete hain ,
    dard dil mein rakhkar dhadkan ko sahne dete hain …

    Keep Smiling

    Ek Ajnabi

  2. @Ek Ajnabi, thanks for appreciating my poem.

  3. Tanu Shree said

    di this poem touched me so deeply… i just dont have words to say……

    just marvelous ….. very toching…

    luv it !!!

    n luv u di 🙂

  4. Dear Tanu, thank you so much for liking and appreciating my poem. You know, your comment always bring a smile to my face! 🙂

    luv u too.

  5. mehek said

    hmmmm rews shayad pyar naam ki chiz hi aisi hoti hai,koi jitna apnasa lagta hai,utna hi kabhi kabhi paraya,marathi mein ek kahavat hai,tujh majha patena,tujhya vachun karmena(teri meri patathi bhi nahi,tere binajiya bhi nahi jata.
    यह कैसा पागलपन है,
    सपने इस दिल में बुन
    ख़ुद ही तोड़ते हो,
    फिर चिल्लाते हो
    मुझे ना रोको,
    मान लो इसबार
    बस एकबार,
    आलिंगन कर लेने दो!

    bahut superb emotions hai rews.very very touvhing,badhai.

  6. vijaya smriti said

    Rewa didi,
    Bahut acchi poem likhi hai aapne.dil ko chhoo jaane waali.mujhe to saare paragraph bahut acche lage lekin sabse jyada last ke do line acche lage hain,”bas ek baar aalingan ker lene do”.aapko ek advice dena chahungi.jab aapke woh aapse ruthe to unhe ye poem dikha dijiyega.maan jaayenge jhat se.bahut acchi hai.acche shabd bhi chune hain aapne.

  7. Mehek, thank you very much for appreciating my poem and liking it. Aapne bilkul shai sahi kaha hai. Hmmm…where there is no fight, there is no love. Ladne ka bhi adhikar usi se hota hai jisse hum pyar karte hen. Yeh sabhi relatioship mein hota hai. So, I think no love no fight.

    rgds

  8. Dear Viji, bahut shukriya. I really love to read your comment here. Lovely comment. Hmmm…tumhara advice kafi achha laga, lekin bahanji pahle mere ‘woh koun honge’ uska to pata chalne do or use to mere life mein aa jane do…fir to tumhara advice sir aankhon per, Main pakka follow karungi. 🙂

    wid luv.

  9. MEET said

    आह ! क्या बात है.

    तुम आख़िर लौट कर
    बार-बार क्यूँ आते हो?

    मुझे ना रोको,
    मान लो इसबार
    बस एकबार,
    आलिंगन कर लेने दो!

    वाह ! सब कुछ तो कह दिया …. अब बचा क्या ?

    हद है !

  10. vijaya smriti said

    arrey humne advance me de diya.pehale se seekh mili rehegi to aisa situation aane per accchi tereh sambhal lengi.issue escalate nahi hoga 😉

  11. rachna said

    very nice

  12. Hello Meetji, let me take this oppurtunity to welcome you to my blog world. Thank you very much for your comment. Abhi to bahut kuch bacha hai kahne ko… 🙂

    @Viji, bahan ji….achha kiya aapne mujhe well in advance mein advice de diya. Hehehe…yeh professional life nahi balki personal life hai…aur yahan koi bhi issue escalate hone ka no chance. Sweet sis ke bataye huye naksh-e-kadam per hamesha chalungi. 😉

    Hi Rachna, shukriya and welcome you to my blog! It will be my pleasure to read all your rachnas and would like to comment on your blog.

    rgds.

  13. Ek Ajnabi said

    इतना जानती हूँ,
    तुम ख़ुद को
    नही संभाल पाओगे,
    ना मिलूंगी तो,
    वक़्त के चंगुल में फस
    बेचैन हो जाओगे!

    so deep ….

    gar jaan-te ho itna ki hum khud ko sambhaal nehi paayenge
    vagair unke katega nehi safar hum baichain se ho jayenge
    kaun kare ilaaz-e-marz humari,mehz lafzon mein kho jaayenge
    ab wo humen mile na mile, hum unko na bhuul paayenge
    rahega intzaar us pal ka jab hum unke ho jaayenge
    fir kyon puuchte hain wo unko wo to baar-2 laut ke aayenge?
    shayad isi wajah se unke kuch to jakham bhar jayenge!

    ye ishq nehi aasaan…..

    Keep Smiling always

    Ek Ajnabi

  14. Shubh said

    Another nice poem.

  15. @Shubh, thank you so much!

    @Ek Ajnabi, thanx again for leaving ur comment!

  16. kya yeh bas ek shayarana andaaz hai ya phir shayar ki shayaari ka raaz ?

    Jo dhun saaz se nikli hai woh dhun sabne suni hai, par jo saaz pe guzri hai woh kis ko pata hai ?

  17. @Ek Aur Ajnabi, shayar ki baat hi zuda hota hai, woh na kahkar bhi bahut kuch jata hai….main to koi shayar nahi hun. Koi raaz nahi hai aur waise bhi ‘raaz ko raaz hi rahne do’ mein believe karti hun! Aapne Rahimji ka doha to padha hi hoga…..Rahiman niz mann ki vyatha mann hi rakho goy….saaz bhi kuch aise hi kism ka hai. 🙂

    rgds.

  18. Tanu Shree said

    “Rahiman niz mann ki vyatha mann hi rakho goy”…ye fasana sabhi ko batate nahi hai magar doston se chupate nahi hai….

    jo dard hai dil me
    bata kar to dekho
    humari dosti ko
    azma kar to dekho!!

  19. @Tanu, jis din tumse mulakat hogi, usdin dil ki sari baat hogi…and you know very well that I will come to meet you soon. Betu dil mein koi dard nahi hai aur na hi dawa ki jarrurat hai, bus aapki duwa ki jarrurat hai…Dil to pagal hai. hehehe tum yahi sunna chahti hogi 😉

  20. Tanu Shree said

    nahi di mai kuch aur bhi sunna chahti thi…par thik hai…jab aapse milungi to hi sahi…

    But still di i m happy ki dil me koi dard nahi hai…n dua to hamesha hi hai saath me…luv u !! 🙂

  21. Tanu Shree said

    ek bhet deti hu aaj aapko…
    subah se taaze
    os se komal,
    narm ghaas se nirmal,,
    aapke hi palaash ke phool!!

  22. इतना बढ़िया लिखने के बाद पूछ रही हो
    तुम आख़िर लौट कर
    बार-बार क्यूँ आते हो?

    अब हम आपकी ना सुनेंगे और बार बार आपकी कवितायें पढ़ने आयेंगे। अफसोस है कि इतना बढ़िया ब्लॉग आज तक हम देख ही नहीं पाये 😦
    क्या आपने अपने ब्लॉग को हिन्दी के ब्लॉग एग्रीग्रेटर से नहीं जोड़ा है?

  23. Jitender Singh said

    are waah bhai …Rewa tum to bahut acha likhne lage ho ….

    तुम आख़िर लौट कर
    बार-बार क्यूँ आते हो?

    waah …ab ye bhi bata do humen akhir ye zikr kiska ho raha hai …keep on writing like this

    Cheers

    Jitender Singh

  24. Amit said

    Hi Rewa

    Wonderful Poem!

    बस एकबार,
    आलिंगन कर लेने दो!

    It has deepest feelings which is very beautiful indeed.

  25. @Tanu, betu ko kuch aur sunna hai…woh to mujhe bhi nahi pata hai ki aapko kya sunna hai but haan jab milungi to jo jee chahe puch lena or sun lena.
    Mohtarma, shukriya itne pyar gift ke liye and you know, you are the 1st person gifted me my fav flower palash. Thank you so much dear.

    @Sagarji, first of all, thank you so much for visiting and posting a comment on my blog. It is always nice to have new visitors. 🙂 Aapka comment padh waqai maza aa gaya…Are sirji aap baar baar aiye aur mera blog padhiye mujhe khushi hogi.

    हिन्दी के ब्लॉग एग्रीग्रेटर के बारे में मुझे जानकारी नही है…सागरजी, मैं सिर्फ़ ब्लॉग लिखती हूँ इसके अलावा कुछ नही जानती. आप थोड़ा इसके बारे में बताएँगे तो अच्छा होगा.

    rgds.

  26. @jitendra, shukriya for appreciation. Sonu, kya baat hai, aajkal tum sawal bahut puchne lage ho! Sirji…kyun bata dun tumhe ki kiska zikra kar rahi hun?

    @Amit, Thank you tons for reading my poem and for putting your feelings in words on my blog.

  27. trendsetter7 said

    http://mujehbhikuchkehnahaen.blogspot.com/2008/03/blog-post_17.html

  28. Nidhi said

    Excellent love poem. Honestly saying you write nd convey emotion very well. It’s just flowing feelings that put a real picture into my head.

  29. anupam jha said

    Happy Holi.

  30. vijay gaur said

    achchhi blogging karti hain. badhai evm shubh kamnain holi ke rango ke sath

  31. Ila said

    U have already managed to strike a chord within my entire being.रेवाजी, इतना अच्छा लिखेन्गीं तो हम को बार बार लौट के आना ही होगा ना? मह्कजी के ब्लौग से आपके ब्लौग का पता मिला,सो घूमते घूमते आ पहुंचे आपके द्वार पर.अब तो आना जाना लगा ही रहेगा,आपको पढने का लालच जो हो गया है.

  32. @trendsetter7, I don’t know you, but anyway thanks for puting the link here.

    Dear Nidhi, it’s always my pleasure to know that somewhere I have touched you through my poem. I always enjoy your comments. It is nice to know that you are still around and been visiting my blog.

    @Anupam, shukriya and happly holi to you too.

    Hi Vijayji, you are most welcome to my blog world. Thank you for the comment you left and also thnx for appreciating the poem. Please feel free to read and leave any comments.

    Hi Ilaji, a warm welcome to my blog! Thank you so much for comment that just make me feel good. यह आप सब रीडर्स के नज़रों का कमाल है, जिनकी निगाहें मेरे ब्लॉग के तरफ आकर मुझे खुश करती है! मैं तो हमेशा चाहूँगी की आप बार-2 आइए, मैं इसके लिए आपकी सदैव अभारी रहूंगी.

    A heartful thank to all my friends who just took out time to write so many good and lovely words upon my poem. And Wish you all my readers a very happy holi. 🙂

    rgds.

  33. bahut khoob…..is par jane kyu “ranzish hi sahi” yaad aa gayi

  34. Durlabh Darshan said

    wah wah, kya baat hai..
    waise ji ek baat kahu? aap bura to nahi man jawogi na phir se?
    ab jo aap likhti hai na ji
    wo dekhkar lagta hai ki jaise
    pahle jo aap likhti thi, wo to aap kuchh likhti hi nahi thi
    waise mujhe ye aapka har poem padhne ke baad aisa hi lagta hai
    isliye gustakhi maaf

    instant comm hai
    original
    plastic ke nahi

    Durlabh 🙂

  35. Munish Rana said

    Hi rewa,

    this poem is really very very touchy & full of emotions & feelings. really xited to know you more.

    Munish.

  36. @Anurag Arya, shukriya. Bahut achhi ghazal hai. Mujhe is ghazal mein sabse achhi yeh lines lagi…pahale se maraasim na sahi phir bhi kabhi to rasm-o-rahe duniyaa hi nibhaane ke liye aa!

    @DD, bahut bahut dhanyawad jo aapko meri poem achhi lagi. Waise yeh apne apne dekhne aur padhne ka nazariya hai.

    @Munish, thank you for your lovely comment and appreciating my poem. There is nothing to know more about me. I am very simple girl thats all I know about myself.

    rgds.

  37. Manoj said

    vah kya khub pharmaya hai aapne.aaj laga ki koi dil ko tuch kar gaya.

    thanks
    manoj

  38. हाँ! सच है ये…..!
    मेरा लौटना भी तय था|
    अगर गया होता मैं,
    कहीं दूर तुम्हें छोड़कर|
    और अब कि मैं,
    ये समझ ही नहीं पाता,
    तुम्हारे पास भी रहकर,
    तुमसे इतना दूर क्यूँ हूँ|
    इस एहसास ने आखिरकार,
    बार-बार तुम्हारे पास,
    भेजा मुझे, तुम्हें यह बताने के लिये,
    मंजिल भी एक हैं अपने,
    और रास्ते भी एक हैं|

    हाँ! सच है ये,
    नहीं संभल सकूँगा मैं,
    मुझसे बेहतर ये तुम जानती हो,
    इस उमिद्द में मैं बेचैन हो जाता हूँ,
    कि अबतक तुमने,
    मुझे संभाला क्यूँ नहीं?

    ये पागलपन ही है,
    तुम्हें पाने की|
    और डर भी है,
    तुम्हें खोने का|
    इसलिये चिल्लाता हूँ मैं,
    अपनी विवशता पर|
    तुम्हारा आलिंगन इसलिये,
    क्यूंकि तुम माँ की,
    परछाई जैसी हो|
    तुम्हारे आलिंगन में,
    आनंद नहीं,
    शांति है! ठहराव है! सुकून है!
    वहां वक़्त भी ठहरता है,
    महसूस किया है मैंने…..

  39. Dr Vishwas Saxena said

    Dear author
    I am not able to understand one thing,why people get enslaved to relationships,I do agree that relationships are quite essential but getting enslaved to them is not wise.Lucky are those who receive emotion in return of same emotion.Nevertheless if they dont get it then they should close this chapter for good and proceed ahead.It takes hardly few days to recupe from any emotional jolt you know.Confused are those who feel that carrying on a relationship would be difficult but staying without it will again be more difficult!kill this evil and be a true human.Remember no emotion is same for long and if it is not then why to crave for it.I suggest cherish good memories of any association,lock them up in your heart and proceed further to witness beautiful scenes to emerge in your life.I am sure my comment hits to the right target and right persons.Blessings
    Dr Vishwas Saxena

  40. raddika said

    vaah
    kitne khoobsurat vichaar
    aisaa hi kuch kabi kabi ho jaata hai
    hum samajh nahi paate
    ki hum chodnaa chaahate hain ya chalnaa chaahte hain
    isi kashmakash ka naam hai Zindage
    ye to vohi huaa
    DIL LENA TE DIL DENA
    K SAUDAA IKKO JAYAA

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