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गुमराह तो नही हुए…!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on February 23, 2008

कुछ ख़ास सड़कों की,
आज शिकायत है,
कहीं हम,
गुमराह तो नही हुए?

क्यूँ ख़ौफ़ आज,
हर राह-गुज़र के,
दिलों में,
समाने लगा है,
अपनी कामयाबी का, 
क्या यही पहचान है!

माना कि,
हम आज़ाद हें,
फिर क्यूँ,
हर कोई,
अपनी किस्मत पर,
यूँ आँसू बहा रहे हें!

भूखे भटकते,
मरते बच्चों को,
ये सड़कें,
आज बख़ूबी,
होशियारी से,
राह दिखा रही है! 

मना लो जश्न,
आज़ादी की,
कर लो सोलह सृंगार,
बस इन्हें लौटा दो,
हँसती-खेलती,
उड़ती खिलखिलाती,
इनकी खुशियों का संसार!

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27 Responses to “गुमराह तो नही हुए…!”

  1. Ek Ajnabi said

    Excellent exposition …keep it up.

    Ek Ajnabi

  2. tanu said

    rewa di
    apke kya kahu….
    wel sach kahu.. this is the one i like most…
    superb,beautiful,,,,,

    Sab hote huye bhi aaj hum kahi na kahi kitne galat hai….
    kaash ye awaz un dilo tak pohoche jinhe ye sabse pehle samajhna chahiye!!

  3. निशा said

    कविता तो बहुत अच्छी है पर आजादी तो यूँ मत लौटाने की बात मत करिये. इसे अन्यथा मत लीजिये पर एक बात बतायिगा? ये किससे कह रहीं हैं?

  4. निशा, बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद. मैं आपके शब्दों कि अभारी हूँ और इन्हे बिल्कुल अन्यथा नही ले रही हूँ. आपने सही कहा है. यह मैं आम जनताओं से कह रही हूँ जो पैसे को यूँ ही उड़ाते हें. और यह मैं उन भूखे बच्चों के तरफ से कह रही हूँ जिन्हें दो वक़्त कि रोटी के लिए सड़कों पर भटकना पर रहा है. इनके लिए स्वतंत्रता और परतंत्रता क्या?

  5. Really Good One !

  6. @Ajnabiji, thank you very much for appreciating my poem.

    @तनु, बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया बहनजी. 🙂 तनु उनके दिलों तक भी इन बच्चों की आवाज़ पहुँचेगी क्योंकि भगवान के घर में देर है पर अंधेर नही!

    @प्रेम सर, सलाम और शुक्रिया!

  7. निशा, वहाँ थोड़ा सा बदलाव की है. अब शायद ज़्यादा सही लगे. शुक्रिया.

  8. Shubh said

    Nice poem. Who created evil? God or men or women or all?

  9. mehek said

    bahut emotional bana diya rews,what deep meaning each words has.भूखे भटकते,
    मरते बच्चों को,
    ये सड़कें,
    आज बख़ूबी,
    होशियारी से,
    राह दिखा रही है!
    bahut sahi kaha,sdakein hi in bachhon ki hamsafar aur guide bani hai,kuch achhe insan ban jate hai,kuch gunah ki raah chal dete hai,god look some of your children r living in luxury and sone even dont get to eat.magar phir bhi shayad ye hi jeevan hai,kuch luck factor,kuch karam.very vry touching poem.

  10. Shubh said

    Communism is the only way to bridge the gap between rich and poor. But unfortunately communism is not practiced sincerely world wide. And India is demacratic country so you’ll always see rich and poor.

  11. Hi Shubh,

    Thaks for your concern and comment. You are very right and agreed with your views. But, we have to ask ourselves some questions, isn’t it? Don’t you think we all have created this evil? You can see a person with so many cars around and 60% people under poverty line. Shubh, WB is stil a communist state then why we find same situtaion there?

    In present scenario, I think now globalization is going to create a very wide gap between rich and poor. And now you will see the global gap between rich and poor countries.

    @Mehek, shukriya! Tumne sahi kaha…yeh hi zindagi hai aur chalti hi jayegi.

  12. Shubh said

    Definitely, evil was created by humans. This is because everyone wants to survive better. Survival comes first. God or bad comes later. First somebody has to survive. Then he can think of good or bad. God or bad doesn’t make any difference to totality. But since, we don’t know the totality it makes difference to us. For example – there is a half filled glass with water. Now someone can say glass is half full. Other can say glass is half empty. Both are right. But the attitude is different. That create problems. When apperantly differnt ideology assert on the same fact – problem arise. Then evil is created.

    WB is communist state just for sake of name. It’s not truly a communist state. CPM is just like other parties like Congress, BJP. Fundamentally, they have some Marxist ideology. That’s ture. But they don’t follow it strictly. They somehow win the elections just like any other party. I believe Marx and Engels could not practically established the communist principles. It just remained in the books. This was furhter deprecated by Hitler in the world war 2. Otherwise, I do not see any flaws in the theory in order to raise proletariat.

    I am not fully sure if globalization can always increase the gap between rich and poor. Because, I see MNCs raising the status of many poors. I might be wrong. However, one thing I am sure that, it’s definitely going to destroy Indian Culture. And it has already destroyed to a large extent. Many things has changed in the last 10 year. The last 10 year was the most dramatic.

  13. Amit said

    मना लो जश्न,
    आज़ादी की,
    कर लो सोलह सृंगार,
    बस इन्हें लौटा दो,
    हँसती-खेलती,
    उड़ती खिलखिलाती,
    इनकी खुशियों का संसार!

    A nice poem.

  14. Jitender Singh said

    Hi Rewa

    Bahut acha likhte ho …ati uttam …keep it up…

    regards

    Jitender Singh

  15. Tarun said

    भूखे भटकते,
    मरते बच्चों को,
    ये सड़कें,
    आज बख़ूबी,
    होशियारी से,
    राह दिखा रही है!

    very touching….

    -tarun

  16. Hi Amit, thanks to you for your comment.

    Hi Tarun, thanks for your visit and comment on my blog. Also thanks to you for liking the poem.

    Shubh, yes, the way globalization has changed the world with a speed and drastically no one had expected! We can see the global impact on economic, political, cultural in remarkable ways in just a few years. Ek taraf it has opened up new links between economic development and on the other hand it has changed the international relationships. Nevertheless, it has changed the face of many countries and the world’s scenario has changed dramatically as well. However in India, it has created a new life style as well as it is changing our perceptions. Anyway, we can find good or bad in everything everywhere. 🙂

    Hello jitender urf mr. sonu, kya baat hai bahut dino baad tum bhule bhatke mere blog per achanak dastak de gaye! Kahin yeh bhul bhulaiya movie ka asar to nahi hai? 😉 Anyway, shukriya for appreciating my poem!

    rgds

  17. Jitender Singh said

    Hi Boss

    Haan bhul-bhulayiya movie ka asar to pakka hai per tum ye batao ki itna acha kaise likh lete ho? Really yaar u r incredible …cheers

    regards

  18. सोनू बॉस, क्यूँ मज़ाक उड़ा रहे हो? ऐसा है मुझे आसमान पर मत चढ़ाओ. तुम्हे यह वाली कहावत तो याद होगी “आसमान से गिरा ख़ज़ूर पे अटका” और अगर मैं गिरी तो मुझे झाड़ भी नहीं मिलेगा अटकने के लिये….एक ही बार में धड़ाम से धरती पर गिरूंगी. 😆 समझे आप या नही? मज़ाक कर रही थी, दिल पर मत लेना. वैसे शुक्रिया मेरी कविता पसंद करने के लिए! 🙂

    rgds

  19. Tanu Shree said

    sach kaha di…aaj nahi to kal unhe ye jaanana hi hoga ki wo humare desh ko kaha le ja rahe hai, bt besides we shud keep the spirit up!!

    We r the one most responsible to bring up sm change ….
    Tum chalo To Hindustan chale…the new anthem is lighting up the way for us….for a newer , better n improved India!!

    Jai Hind!!
    LUV U !!

  20. Anupam Jha said

    Ding-Dong!Donot go any where,just enjoy the moment rite here!! so much already said n done,i guess better,i just read all those,n enjoy…silent watcher!

  21. Jitender Singh said

    सोनू बॉस, क्यूँ मज़ाक उड़ा रहे हो? ….

    Hi Rewa boss to tum ho yaar. Main aasmaan pe nehi chdha raha huun ye to aap aasmaan ki unchaiyon ko apni safalta se chhu rahe ho. Hum to bass aapke hausle buland dekhna chahte hain bahi. So keep on going with the high spirit. … cheers ….

    regds

  22. Ek Ajnabi said

    In all I should say that

    We can only change ourselves, individually (irrespective of looking at what others do!), and rest would be the positive result ….

    JAI HIND

    Ek Ajnabi

  23. ami said

    kuch baat to hai in panktiyon mein, jo chhoti hai kayi lamho ko

    Ati sundar

  24. Nidhi said

    भूखे भटकते,
    मरते बच्चों को,
    ये सड़कें,
    आज बख़ूबी,
    होशियारी से,
    राह दिखा रही है!

    Your poem touched my heart. The last four stanza of poem is so painfull,ankhain bhar aai.

  25. Ami Jha said

    bahut bahut sundar likha hai aapne Rewa bhole baba ke bare hai.

    maine jo varnan kiya tha wo Vaishali district ke hajipur sahar se jura hua tha.

    Mahashivratri ki hardik badhaiya.

  26. @Tanu, do kadam tum bhi chalo do kadam ham bhi chalein aur hamari inhi do kadamon ke sath se kuch baat banegi.

    @Anupam, hmmm….shukriya silent watcher for your comment!

    @Sonu, thanx friend…thank you so much for your lovely words!

    @Ek Ajnabi, yea, you are right. Instead of chaning him/herself everybody wants to change the world, no one wants to be changed.

    @Ami, welcome to my blog. you know kabhi kabhi kuch baaten kayi lamhon ko peeche chod deti hai! Aapko bhi Mahashivratri ki hardik badhaiyan. Hamare bhole baba ki baat hi nirali hai. Bahut bahut shukirya for droping comments on my blog.

    @Nidhi, though it is painful but yahi duniya ka sahi roop hai! Sorry for your pain dear. 😦

    rgds

  27. Dr Vishwas Saxena said

    Rewa
    I appreciate your concern over countries plight today.but when liberators of india were laying their life they have renderred their tourch in our hands.If I could have been a new visitor of this page I would request you to take charge but now I know you well and that is why i am assured that young people like you have already taken charge.So carry on with your onward march and embark on your endeavours. Remember You are very capable to bring country bright future carryon and I too support you in your pursuits.Blessings.
    Dr vishwas saxena.

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