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मायूसी क्यूं…!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on September 9, 2007

तुमने,
जाने से पहले
क्या इजाज़त लेने कि,
तक्कल्लुफ़ की थी?

यूँ ही बिन बताए,
चले गये थे!
फिर क्यूं वापस आकर,
आज कहते हो मुझसे,
कि एक बार दरवाज़ा खोलो!

मेरे एक छोटे से सवाल से
तुम्हारे चेहरे पर फिर,
आज एक अजीब सी
मायूसी क्यूं….!

************

Tumne jaane se pahle
kya ijaazat lene ki,
takalluf ki thee?

yun hi bin bataye,
chale gaye the!
phir kyun wapas aakar,
aaj kahte ho mujhse,
ki ek baar darwaza kholo!

Mere ek chote se sawal se,
tumhare chehre per phir,
aaj ek ajeeb si,
mayushi kyun….!

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21 Responses to “मायूसी क्यूं…!”

  1. Amit said

    Excellent and well written

  2. Juneli said

    iss kyon ka jawab mila ki nahin?

    simple and sweet. Keep writting.

  3. Nidhi said

    Very Nice.Mashallah bahut acha likhi hein parh kar dil khush hua.

    In diwano Se Keh do Kahin Aur Jayen
    Mera Dil Hai Dil, Koi Dharamshala Nahin Hai. 😉

    aise logon ke liye darwaza hamesha ke liye band………

  4. Ek Ajnabi said

    तुमने जाने से पहले
    क्या इजाज़त लेने कि,
    तक्कल्लुफ़ की थी?

    यूँ ही बिन बताए,
    चले गये थे!
    फिर क्यूं वापस आकर,
    आज कहते हो मुझसे
    कि एक बार दरवाज़ा खोलो!

    मेरे एक छोटे से सवाल से
    तुम्हारे चेहरे पर फिर,
    आज एक अजीब सी
    मायूसी क्यूं….!

    waah…kaabil-e-taareef….If it is imagined that the one for whom this poem has been written, visits this blog, then in his/her own views: paish-e- khidmat hain kuch shabd…
    *
    gar humen pata hota ki
    humen ijajat leni hogi
    gar hum jaan paate ki
    humen prashnon ka uttar dena hoga
    hum yuun hi khaamosh, mayoos na hote
    ae dil tuu bata de unhen zara
    ki hum yuun dastak de mud na gaye hote..!

    hum shukar guzaar hain ooper wale ke
    jo isi bahaane aap ne humen yaad kiya
    warna…aapke dil-o-dimaag se
    hum kab ke utar gaye hote…..
    dard udhar bhi hai, saaf jaahir hai ye
    ki yuun hi humse sawaal kiye na hote…
    *
    Keep Smiling Always

    Ek Ajnabi

  5. Ruchi said

    Tere dar pe ei dost,
    hum nikle the zamaane ki rangeeniyan dekhne
    magar zamaane ke hazaaron rango mei doob kar jaana
    tere dosti ki rangeeni se akarshak koi indradhanush nahi…
    teri pyar ki khushboo se khoobsurat koi chandan nahi….

    aur socha tha ki tere dil se bada koi ashiyan nahi
    tabhi subah se bhatka tere dar par lauti hoon…
    kya tu mere dil ka haal nahi jaanti, ei dost??
    zara andar jhaank apne, tujhe tere jawaab mil jaenge..

  6. Aflatoon said

    A Short and sweet poem. The words are so true and you have great content here.

  7. ritesh kumar singh said

    Tumhari es kavita ne mujhe jhakjhor diya. lekin tumhare kavita me kuchha khas baat hai. jo mere dil ko chhu liya.

  8. Ek Ajnabi said

    Raah bhar koi bhi kehin humen mila nehin
    kya gajab hai kaarwaan fir bhi chalta raha…..!

    Keep Smiling

    Ek Ajnabi

  9. Hi Amit, thnx for appreciating my poem.

    Juneli, thanku so much for ur comment. “khamoshi mei bhi aksar goonj sunai de jata hai..!” This is a line of my upcoming poem. Hope you will get answer there in that poem 🙂

    Shukriya nidhi mam. waise Sarfrosh ka asar hai, ya fir tera fav amir ka? 😉

    Ruchi dear, Lovely and Fantastic one. I have written a poem inspired by your poem, will post that soon.

    Mr. Aflatoon, thnx alot for appreciation.

    Ritesh, hmmm…mera yah simple sa poem tumhe jhakjhore diya! kya baat hai. waise I was expecting ki yah tumhare dimag ko bhi choo lega but Fitjee mei padate-2 woh ab thak chuka hai, use aaram ki shakht jarrurat hai. just kiding. 😉

    Mr Ajnabi, thnx for ur comment. waise “Har koi chahta hai ek muthi asmaan…!”

    Thnx to all.

  10. vijaya smriti said

    bahut acche rewa didi.hame to pata hi nahi tha ki aap itani acchi kawiyitri hain

  11. Hi Viji,

    Thanku for ur sweet comment dear. vijaya smriti hmmm half name of rewa smriti. Viji waise hamare name achhe hen. 🙂 I hope you must have left office or abhitak ghar pahunch chuki hogi.

    Hamdono ke name se ek poem abhi likha hai.

    रेवा के पन्नों में,
    स्मृति के चलचित्र,
    हर दिन, हर पल,
    होगी विजया की चर्चा,
    शाम ढले, चाँद खिले,
    शब्दों की गूथ विजय माला,
    बन विजया स्मृति गाथा.

    how is this? 🙂

  12. vijaya smriti said

    waah…waah ….waah. aap to meri imagination se kahin badker kawiyitri nikali.maine socha nahi tha mere aur aapke naam ko itani khoobsoorati se joda ja sakta hai.main kya kehun/meri to bolati band ker di aapne apane poems se

  13. satyajeet said

    hi rewa

    why don’t you post all poems in english as well so that fans like me, who comes to cyber cafe for checking new entries don’t have to download hindi fonts again n again.

    Hai Ki Nahi 🙂

    satyajeet

  14. Dear Viji, a very sweet gal of my office, thnx a lot dear for your appreciation.

    Hi Satyajeet, thanks for dropping your comment here. After a long time I got your comment. Lagta hai India wapas aa gaye ho. 🙂 Surprised to know that you come cyber cafe to read my poems. I will be happy of writing in english font too so that my readers or friends can read my poems easily. Thnku very much for ur suggestions.

    Bilkul sahi hai ji 😉

    rgds,
    Rewa.

  15. Hemant said

    This is the best poem I have ever read. It says very big thing in small words. I am personally attached with this poem as it says a lot to me in my heart.

    Excellent poem Rewa…………….

    Please do write a poem for a person who is very very far from his own people and his streets and desperately waiting to get them asap.

  16. Hi Hemant, I can understand your feelings. I wil surely write a poem with the content you have suggested above in your comment. Thnx a lot for liking my poem. Waise ek baat kahun, As you are far from your country and your own people, thatsy you found somehow very attached with this poem. But as a friend I would say ‘her khushi ho wahan tu jahan bhi rahe’…so, dont worry keep smiling. 🙂

  17. Dr Vishwas Saxena said

    Sorry Rewa
    YOU HAVE FAILED IN THIS SMALL TEST!yes ! you know why ?the essence of any relationship never lies in taking a revenge or crying out a grudge–!If our counterpart erratically gets deflected and rekons again to come back, knocks at your door for support then shower him/her your best affection this is not the time of venegence.If you do so you are absolutely far from understanding the meaning of this divine feeling–! you are a bargainer? and I am very sorrily prophecising that you shall never get a true response if you cling to this reaction.Sorry for being bluntly candid but I have to be!With my blessings and wishes
    Dr Vishwas Saxena

  18. Satish said

    @Vishwas Saxena Ji

    pahli baat to ki kavita ki dictionary me logic shabd nahi hota hai
    ye to us ek “pal” ke jazbaat hote hain jinhe shabdo me dhaal diya jata hai
    baad me bhale hi unka koi matlab na ho
    aur dusri ki jaruri nahi ko jo aapki feelings hon wahi duniya ke har insaan ki
    kavita soch kar nahi likhi jaati. Zaruri nahi ki kisi given situation me har kisi ka reaction ek jaisa hi ho. Feelings do not follows the laws of physics.
    Apko kavita aur Physics ka fark samajhne ki Jarurat hai.

  19. nidhu said

    sorry Dr. saxena i think u have decided to critise everthing of the posts and poems..u failed to understand the pure and true feelings behind the poem..plz use ur heart not ur head to understand the meaning behind these poems…

  20. Dr Vishwas Saxena said

    @ satish & Nidhu
    I thank both of you for extending your counter comments. Since I comply to rewas earlier blog to not to make this platform a place of argument I wont carry any further.
    I hope I will try to relearn poetry by using heart.I pray both of you stick to your present views even after 10 tears.Regards and wishes.
    Dr Vishwas

  21. Hi Friends,

    I know, it is difficult to capture the essence of each poem with the same spirited line. Sometimes people may interpret it wrong way if they do not able to understand the essence of the poem, but We should try to make them understand it. So for additional help, I am writing the meaning of the poem.

    The meaning: kavita ka bhav ye hai ki ek insan kisi se pyar karta hai aur bina kuch apne beloved ko bataye kahin chale jata hai and he returns after some years. When he comes back and knocking the door of his beloved, he finds a lot of changes as she has started a new life. Chuki woh batakar nahi jata hai, she couldn’t wait for long time as situation couldn’t let her wait for him. At last seeing this changes one finds defficult to express and become speechless, only thing left is on once’s face is MAYUSHI.The undefine love hided in each words!

    rgds.

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