Turning the wheel…

…..when the blue water plays with the shore to tell something…..

मेरी मंज़िलें…!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on August 2, 2007

In this poem I am trying to boost myself in all aspects of my life with the great enthusiastic.

हर सफ़र की एक मंज़िल है,
मेरे सफ़र की मंज़िलें कई,

आज एक मिली कल नई शुरू हुई,
बस चलती चली मैं यूँ ही हर घड़ी,

अपने सफ़र के मुसाफ़िर हम कहीं,
इन मंज़िलों के मालिक मेरा खुदा कहीं,

यूँ ही सफ़र का दौर चलता रहेगा,
नई मंज़िलें मैं गढ़ती रहूंगी!

     *************

Her safar ki ek manjil hai,
mere safar ki manjilen kai,

aaj ek mili kal nai shuru hui,
kis or chali main yun hi her ghadi,

apne safar ke musafir ham kahin,
in manjilon ke malik mera khuda kahin,

yun hi safar ka dour chalta rahega.
nai manjilen main gadti rahungi.

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17 Responses to “मेरी मंज़िलें…!”

  1. Nidhi said

    Again bahut achha!

    aapki poem padkar kishore kumar ki ek song yaad aa gayi.
    this song is for you 🙂

    ruk jaana nahi tu kahi haar ke…
    kaanto pe chalke milenge saaye bahaar ke
    o raahi o raahi…….
    saathi na kaarva hai,ye tera imtihaa hai…
    yu hi chala chal dil ke sahare
    karati hai manzil tujhko ishaare
    dekh kahi koi rok na le tujhko pukar ke
    o raahi o raahi…….

  2. Ek Ajnabi said

    ****
    ”हर सफ़र की एक मंज़िल है,
    मेरे सफ़र की मंज़िलें कई,

    आज एक मिली कल नई शुरू हुई,
    बस चलती चली मैं यूँ ही हर घड़ी,

    अपने सफ़र के मुसाफ़िर हम कहीं,
    इन मंज़िलों के मालिक मेरा खुदा कहीं,

    यूँ ही सफ़र का दौर चलता रहेगा,
    नई मंज़िलें मैं गढ़ती रहूंगी!”
    ****
    ye maana ki har safar ki ek manzil hai
    ye bhi mana ki aapke safar ki kayi manzilen,
    apne safar ke humraaz aap hi sahi
    aapki manzilon ka maalik wo khuda sahi
    aapke safar ka daur to chalta rahega aur aap nayi manzilen bhi gad te rahenge
    lekin kyon bhuulte ho, ho kar bekhabar,
    ke kisi raah per kisi mode pe kisi ke safar ki manzil ho aap
    kehna padega khuda se bhi ki
    ek manzil aisi ho aapke bhi paas.
    ****
    duur ho manzil raasta mushkil badhte jaana re…badhte jaana re…

    Good Luck

    Keep on Smiling
    Ek Ajnabi

  3. Dino said

    aapki poem padhkar mujhe bhi ek song yaad aa gaya…

    chalte chalte mere ye geet yaad rakhna ..
    kabhi alvida na kahna …kabhi alvida na kahana….

    rote hanste bas uoon hi tum gungunate rahana….
    kabhi alvida na kahna……kabhi alvida na kahanaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…

  4. Amit said

    अपने सफ़र के मुसाफ़िर हम कहीं,
    इन मंज़िलों के मालिक मेरा खुदा कहीं,

    apun ko bahut pasand aya. 🙂

    manzilen apni jagah hen raste apni jagah
    jab qadam hi sath na de to musaafir kya kare.

    Raste hi raste hain, kaisa hai yeh safar………..

  5. Juneli said

    hmmmmm so you are in search of nai manzeel……

    Wish you all the best.

    Nice poem…

  6. Shukriya to everybody for writing inspitational words.

    Now one song for all of you from my side. 🙂 This is an inspitational song which encourages one to keep moving ahead regardless of all the sadness and obstacles of life. This song has been sung by Manna dey and I think his voice was best for classical or for inspirational songs. I liked it very much.

    Nadiya chale chale re dhara
    Chanda chale chale re tara
    Tujhko chalna hoga ,tujhko chalna hoga
    Jeewan kahi bhi thaharta nahi hai
    Aandhi se toofaan se dartaa nahi hai
    Tu na chalega to chal dengi raahe
    Manzil ko tarsengi teri nigaahein….

    Keep walking…..till life exist.

  7. Amrit Mishra said

    Quite Exciting.
    Har kisee ko mukammal jahaan naheen milataa
    kissi ko jameen to kissi ko aasamaan naheen mila

  8. Hi Amrit, 1st of all I welcome you here. Happy to see your comment. 🙂

    Main bus itna jaanti hun-
    Ruk jaana nahin tu kahin haar ke,
    Kaanton pe chal ke milenge saaye bahaar ke,
    O raahi O raahi…!

  9. dino said

    Raasta koi kaamyabi ka mil jaaye to chalun,
    Manzil koi mujhko nazer aaye to chalun,
    Hargiz na main rukunga, chalna hai mujhe lekin,
    Kaante meri raahon se nikal jaaye to chalun.

  10. Hi Dino,

    Nice poem! is it your own written?
    Anyway, I have written this poem when I was in BA 1st yr in JNU and started my college life.

    महक़ती फूलों की तमन्ना रखने वालों,
    काटों की महफ़िल से ना घबराओ,
    उगते हुए सूरज की रोशनी को देखो,
    हर रोज़ एक नई आशाएं लेकर आती है!

    rgds,
    rewa

  11. Gopal Baranwal said

    Hi.. nice poem di..

  12. Hi Gopal,

    Thanku for your comment and I welcome you in my blog world. 🙂

  13. amu said

    hi Di
    Navodaya se nikalte waqt aapne mere diary me kuch likha tha,aaj wahi likhne ko ji chah raha hai is poem ko padhkar-
    ‘hoke mayush na yun tum sham si dhalti raho,
    jindagi bhor hai suraj ki tarah nikalti raho,
    ek paon pe khadi rahogi to thak jaogi,
    dhire dhire hi sahi kintu sahi rah par chalti raho’
    beautiful poem………..

  14. Hi Amu!

    Welcome to bangalore as well as on my blog. Tujhe abhitak yaad hai ye four lines! mujhe nahi yaad tha ki tere diary mei maine yeh likha tha. Thank you dear for your lovely comment and also for reminding me these lines! miss you.

  15. Hemant said

    It seems to be the story of my life. A great and heartfelt poem.

  16. Hemant, thanku so much for your appreciation. Ek song yaad aa rahi hai….uske kuchh lines likh rahi hun aap sunna ise.

    पार हुआ वो रहा जो सफ़र में,
    जो भी रुका फ़िर गया वो भँवर में,
    नाव तो क्या बह जाये किनारा,
    बड़ी ही तेज समय की है धारा,
    तुझको चलना होगा…….!

    Try to listen this song.

  17. mehhekk said

    manzile kai aayengi kis raah jana ye tujhe tay karna hai,this is awesome.

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