Turning the wheel…

…..when the blue water plays with the shore to tell something…..

नज़्म-ए-अदा…!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on June 25, 2007

हवाओं के साथ मेरी वफ़ाएँ गूँजती है,
नज़्म-ए-अदाएँ मेरे रूह से खेलती है!

तख़्त-ओ-ताज़ की सरताज़ अब वो मुमताज़ कहाँ,
यह मैं नही मेरे दोस्तों की खू़बसूरत ज़ुबान बोलती है!

हुस्ऩ-ए-नूर वो तख़्त-ओ-ताज़ के हम मोहताज़ नही,
शमां बुझ ना जाए बस अंदाज़-ए-मोहब्बत अल्फ़ाज़ गूँजती है!

चँद लम्हों का यह  चौदहवीं का चाँद आया था बड़ी मुश्किल से,
आते-जाते यह एहसास दिलाया, मेरी ज़िंदगी की है शमां सिर्फ़ तुमसे!

Hawaon ke sath meri wafayen gunjti hai,
nazm-e-adaayen mere ruh se khelti hai!

Takht-o-taaz ki sartaaz ab wo mumtaaz kahan,
yah main nahi mere doston ki khubsurat juban bolti hai!

Hushn-e-noor wo takh-o-taaz ke ham mohtaaz nahi,
shama bujh na jae bas andaaz-e-mohbbat alfaaz goonjati hai!

Chand lamhon ka yah choudahwin ka chand aaya tha badi mushkil se,
aate-jate yah ehsaas dilaya, meri zindagi ki shama hai sirf tumse!

Shukriya!

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11 Responses to “नज़्म-ए-अदा…!”

  1. Ek Ajnabi said

    *
    Hawaon ke sath meri wafayen gunjti hai,
    nazm-e-adaayen mere ruh se khelti hai!
    Takht-o-taaz ki sartaaz ab wo mumtaaz kahan,
    yah main nahi mere doston ki khubsurat juban bolti hai!
    Hushn-e-noor wo takh-o-taaz ke ham mohtaaz nahi,
    shama bujh na jae bas andaaz-e-mohbbat alfaaz goonjati hai!
    Chand lamhon ki yah choudahwin ki chand aai thee badi mushkil se,
    aate-jate yah ehsaas dilaya, meri zindagi ki shama hai sirf tumse!
    *
    bahut khoob….beautiful lines…
    *
    “Takht-o-taaz ki sartaaz ab wo mumtaaz kahan,
    yah main nahi mere doston ki khubsurat juban bolti hai!”
    huzur har dil mein ek tamanna hoti hai
    tamanna raaz raha karti hai
    yuun to mushkil hai har ek ke liye taazmehal banana
    fir bhi har ek dil mein ek mumtaz rehti hai…..
    *
    chirag-e-mohabbat ki shama itni kamzor nehin jo hawa ke jhonke se bujh jaaye
    aji palat ke dekhiye us chaand ko
    zo aapke ruksat hone tak chamkane ki khwaaish le baitha hai
    khuda kare ye shama-e-mohabbat jalti rahe yuun hi ki aapke didaar-e-rubaru ko ye nikalta hai har shaam-e-tanhayi mein…
    *
    chanda re chanda re kabhi to zameen per aa baithenge baaten karenge…..

    ye ishq nehin aasaan

    keep on smiling always
    Ek Ajnabi

  2. Amit said

    Most Beautiful line – “नज़्म-ए-अदाएँ मेरे रूह से खेलती है!”

    Naushadji ki ghazal ki ek line hai use main yahan likhna chahunga.

    न मंदिर में सनम होते, न मस्जिद में खुदा होता
    हमीं से यह तमाशा है, न हम होते तो क्या होता

  3. Atul said

    shayrana si hai jindgi ki faja,
    aap bhi jindgi ka maza lijiye.
    men gazal ban gaya aapke saamne,
    shauk se ab mujhe gunguna lijiye.
    aap sun to rahi hain mere dil ki lay,
    ismen benaam si ek udaasi bhi hai,
    iss udaasi men nagma koi chhed kar,
    ek bechain dil ki dua lijiye.

  4. Atul said

    USKI HASRAT HAI JISE, DIL SE BHULA NA SAKU,
    KHOJNE USKO CHALA HUN, JISE PA NA SAKU,
    MEHARBAN HOKE BULAO MUJHE CHAHE JIS WAQT,
    MAIN GAYA WAQT NAHI HUN, JO AA BHI NA SAKU

  5. dino said

    IK DIL WALON KI BASTI THI
    JAHAN CHAND AUR SURAJ REHTE THEY

    KUCH SURAJ MANN KA PAGAL THA
    KUCH CHAND SHOKH AUR CHANCHAL THA

    BASTI BASTI PHIRTEY AUR
    HAR PAL HANSTE REHTE THEY

    PHIR IK DIN DONO ROOTH GAYE
    SARAY SAPNEY TOOT GAYE

    AB CHAND BHI USS WAQT AATA HAI
    SURAJ JAB SO JAATA HAI

    BADAL SHAB SE KEHTE HAIN
    SURAJ ULJHA REHTA HAI

    CHAND KE SAATH SITARAY HAIN
    PAR SURAJ TANHA REHTA HAI….

  6. Nidhi said

    चँद लम्हों का यह चौदहवीं का चाँद आया था बड़ी मुश्किल से,
    आते-जाते यह एहसास दिलाया, मेरी ज़िंदगी की है शमां सिर्फ़ तुमसे!

    wah wah wah!
    zindagi ki hai shamaa kinse? Mam koun hai wo hame bhi batao 😉

  7. Nishat said

    ‘Chand lamhon ka yah choudahwin ka chand aaya tha badi mushkil se,
    aate-jate yah ehsaas dilaya, meri zindagi ki shama hai sirf tumse!’

    mujhe yeh vurf(line) bahoth pasand hai.rewa meri dost mujhe bolo ke kaun hai woh saksh.Aur mujse nahi chupao.agar koi hai toh batado. JUST KIDDING.

  8. Amit said

    When is your next poem coming? waiting.

  9. Santosh Kumar said

    Beautiful Rewa,
    Keep it up:)

  10. Kamlesh said

    Whenever I visit your blog, i can’t stop myself from reading these wonderful lines at least once. Though I don’t understand the full meaning and intentions (of poetess) but I love to recite for its words…which touch the head and heart.

    Keep it up Rewa Di.

  11. mehhekk said

    चँद लम्हों का यह चौदहवीं का चाँद आया था बड़ी मुश्किल से,
    आते-जाते यह एहसास दिलाया, मेरी ज़िंदगी की है शमां सिर्फ़ तुमसे!

    wonderful simply awesome

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