Turning the wheel…

…..when the blue water plays with the shore to tell something…..

बयां-ए-दिल अर्ज़ है…!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on June 2, 2007

बड़ी मिन्नत से माँगा था ख़ुदा से तुझे,
आज वो भी कुछ लुटा सा नज़र आ रहा है!

बनवाने वाले ने ताज़महल बनवा डाला,
मुझे तो वो बस पत्थर सा नज़र आ  रहा है!

तुम ग़ज़ल लिख लो, शेर-ओ-शायरी कर लो,
मेरी नज़्में ना समझो तो अपने दिल की ख़बर पुछ लो!

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29 Responses to “बयां-ए-दिल अर्ज़ है…!”

  1. Atul said

    agar hum na hote to tumhe gazal kaun kahta,
    iss khubsurat chehre ko kamal kaun kahta.
    ye to pyaar hai tumhare chaahne walon ka,
    warna patthar ko taajmahal kaun kahta.

    created by me.
    Atul.

  2. Atul said

    mohabbat ko gar samajhna hai to kud mohabbat kar,
    kinaaronn se tufaan ka andaazen bayan nahi hota..

  3. Atul said

    hamari har shaam nashe men gujarti thee,
    hamari har shaam nashe men gujarti thee,
    ek din shaam nashe men thee aur hum gujar gaye..

  4. Prem said

    कुछ अर्ज यूँ है –

    आपकी ऩज़्में, उनकी वफाओं को समझने से तो मैं रहा,
    उधर हवाओं ने कुछ कहा,फिर नाचीज़ दिल ने कुछ सहा ।

  5. Atul said

    likhu kuch aaj ye waqt ka takaza hai
    dil men dard abhi taza taza hai,
    gir padte hain aansu mere kaagaz par
    lagta hai qalam men shayri kam aur ashq jyada hainn.

  6. Ek Ajnabi said

    *
    “badi minnat se manga tha khuda se tujhe,
    aaj wo bhi kuchh luti sa nazar aa raha hai….!”
    *
    “banwane wale nei taazmahal banwa dala,
    mujhe to wo bus patthar sa nazar aa raha hai!”
    Bahut khuub…..
    *
    Khuda se maanga hai unko to zaruur paaoge
    ye luti hui si nazar kehin beqaraar dil ki kashish to nehin ?
    zanaab paththron pe na jaayi-ye wo bechaare to bezubaan hote hain…
    ek baar un se to nazar milayi ye-fida aap pe jinke jismo-jaan hote hain….!
    *
    ye ishq nehin aasaan……
    Keep Smiling Always
    Ek Ajnabi

  7. veerendra said

    woh vaada kar gaye rat ko khwab main ane ka…
    (zara gaur farmayein)
    woh vaada kar gaye rat ko khwab main ane ka…
    (irshaad…)
    woh vaada kar gaye rat ko khwab main ane ka…
    (ab aage bhi badho….Jan loge kya)
    MAARE KHUSHI KE RAT BHAR NEEND NAHI AYI.
    ( WAH WAH WAH WAH……..)

  8. Amit said

    “बनवाने वाले ने ताज़महल बनवा डाला,
    मुझे तो वो बस पत्थर सा नज़र आ रहा है!”

    Bhaut achhi lines hein

    Apne lekhni ka karwan mat rokna.

    Khair tu Zarra hi sahi, tera alag wajood to hai,
    Hua kare jo samander jo teri talash main hai…..

  9. Ruchi said

    “tune apne dil ke taar khol ek khwab bun daala hai..
    bayan-e-dil karke khuda se kis khus-kismat ko maang daala hai?
    hum to patthar ko bhi taajmahal samajh baithe the
    par tune to pahchaan-e-taaj hi badal dala hai…
    hum dua karte hain ki teri dua kabool ho
    warna aaj tune khuda ko bhi fakira bana dala hai.”

  10. Veerendra said

    gar sangemarmar ishq ki nishani hai
    to hum aashiqo ka kya hoga,
    taj mahal banana to dur ki bat hai aae zalim
    mehbooba ki yad main
    ek jhopda zaroor khada hoga.

  11. Naa koi Taj, Naa Mahal, aur Naahi koi apoon ki Mumtaj !
    Apni life ke apoonich malik, aur is duniya ke apoonich Sartaj !

    Pyaar…Mohabbat..are apoon ko kya maloom yeh kis chidiya ka naam hai…

    Pathhar..moorat…yeh apoon ka kaam nahi !

    pyaar mohabbat..appon ka jaam nahi !

    apoon to bas……khate pite aur sote hai !

    aur aise kisi lootele bhidulog ki dastan soon ke rote hai !

  12. “जब भी तुम्हे जानना चाहा
    मुश्किल लगा
    तुम्हारे शब्दों को समझ पाना

    फिर एक दिन मिटा कर तुम्हारा नाम
    लिखने वाले के नाम की जगह
    अपना नाम लिख दिया”

  13. Juneli said

    So it was the poem. 😀 Nice one.

    Bayan-e-andaz bahut acchaa hai.

    Keep writing.

  14. “na hothon ko juban se sikayat hai na kano ko spandan se
    jarurat ek dil ki hai bat karne ke liye dhadkan se”

    kuchh yesa hi andaz laga aapka mujhe.achhi pakad rakhti hain aap..sabdon ka sahi istemal karna janti hain
    Regards

  15. Ek Ajnabi said

    Revisited:
    *
    “तुम ग़ज़ल लिख लो, शेर-ओ-शायरी कर लो,
    मेरी नज़्में ना समझो तो अपने दिल की ख़बर पुछ लो!”
    *
    Dil ki khabar kya poochen jab dil hi khaamosh ho jaaye
    har pal ye naam le aapka, aur mann bhi madhosh ho jaaye
    ab to aap ko hi kuch karna hoga elaaz-e-is marz ka ki
    saaki ko bhi honthon se laga sakne ki zurrat ye na kar jaaye…
    *
    ye ishq nenhin aasaan…

    Keep Smiling Always
    Ek Ajnabi ….

  16. Amrit Mishra said

    बनवाने वाले ने ताज़महल बनवा डाला,
    मुझे तो वो बस पत्थर सा नज़र आ रहा है!

    A ghazal of eternal truth. Thanks for reminding this hard reality of the world.

  17. Thanks a lot to each one of you for all the comments and lovely shayris!

    Mr. Ajnabi,

    kya baat hai aap to anjaane mein teer chala rahe hein….aisa hai teer andaazi khelne ka jamana gaya ab to ham Hydrogen Bomb se khelte hein…so bach ke rahna, kya pata anjaane mei kahin aapke paas pahunch jaye. 😛

    Sach kahun, dhundo chirag leke bhi…tere jaisa ajnabi yaar nahi milta!!!! 😉 😛

    Hi amrit, nice to read ur comment and thnx for appreciation.

  18. Ek Ajnabi said

    *
    kya baat hai aap to anjaane mein teer chala rahe hein….aisa hai teer andaazi khelne ka jamana gaya ab to ham Hydrogen Bomb se khelte hein…so bach ke rahna, kya pata anjaane mei kahin aapke paas pahunch jaye. 😛
    *
    Sach kahun, dhundo chirag leke bhi…tere jaisa ajnabi yaar nahi milta!!!! 😉 😛

    Bahut khuub kahi……….
    acha laga ye byan-e-andaaz aapka
    banda shukar guzaar hai huzur aapka
    ab zara gaur farmaayi-e-ga is taraf bhi
    ki ye nazraana paish-e-khidmat hai aapka:
    *
    huzur teer chalata kaun hai, ye to khud hi chal jaate hain
    shamaa ka kya dosh, parwaane khud hi ismein jal jaate hai
    behtar hoga agar…hydrogen bomb se udaa de koi humen,ki
    hum us husn-e-noor ke aage dum tod dene ko taras jaate hain
    *
    dhuundhoge gar chiraag lekar,to kai yaar nazar aayenge
    humsa nehin hoga koi,jo ishq mein,jaan tak de jaayenge
    yakeen nehin aata to keh do huzur ki “humaapko aajmaayenge”
    *
    ye ishq nehin aasan

    Keep on Smiling Always
    Ek Ajnabi…

  19. Nidhi said

    Arz hai

    Koi sham aati hai aapki yaad lekar,
    Koi sham jati hai aapki yaad dekar,
    Hamein to us sham ka intezar hai,
    Jo aaye aapko saath lekar.

    Life brings u..
    Life brings u “kabhi kushi kabhi gham”, 4 how long it lasts “na tum jano na hum” but as always “hum tumhare hai sanam” & this is a fact “qayamat se qayamat tak” 😛

  20. Ek Ajnabi said

    “Koi sham aati hai aapki yaad lekar,
    Koi sham jati hai aapki yaad dekar,
    Hamein to us sham ka intezar hai,
    Jo aaye aapko saath lekar.”

    waah-waah….kaabil-e-taareef..farmaya hai aapne
    humaare jigr ko jhakjhod diya aisa tuufaan laya hai aapne
    dil ke taar chhaid diye…anjaane mein humen rulaya hai aapne
    ab hum bhi kuch arj karen ye man mein khyaal aaya hai saath mein…
    humara byaan-e-dil bhi lo haazir hai, ki us yaad ne kehin humen milaya to nehin khaak mein…?
    *
    shaam to aati hai jaati hai
    per kamwakhat ye yaad hai unki ki
    ek baar aa gayi jaa nehin paati hai
    ae shaam tuu keh de jaa kar us chhaliye ko
    ki gum-e-judai hum seh nehin paayenge
    ab to lagta hai tadap tadap ke mar jaayenge
    *

    Yeh Ishq nehin aasaan….

    Keep Smiling

    Ek Ajnabi

  21. amu said

    iski sari line kafi achi hai.padhkar mazaa aa jata hai, plz isi tarah ki 1-2 aur likhna.its really a sweet& meaningful sher.

  22. Hmmm….kya baat hai Nidhi….waise aaj sham kuchh aise aayi hai ki sath mei tumhari yaad laayi hai….and hope to see you soon. thanku. Haan…. Mr. ek ajnabi ji ka jawab bhi achha hai…..

    Amu, shukriya….chalo tujhe maza to aaya….theek hai i will try my best to write few more lines for my sweet and cuteeeee sister.

  23. hindi said

    wah …gazab ki gazal hai

  24. Ek Ajnabi said

    aankh bhar aati hai jab yaad tumhari aati hai
    na janu kyon humen har baat tumhari bhaati hai
    na janu kyon har pal yaad tumhari aati hai
    na janu pyar hai ya lagaav hai, yeh baat rulati hai
    lekin hai sach ye ki humen har pal yaad tumhari aati hai!

    Keep Smiling Always

    Ek Ajnabi

  25. @Hindi,

    Bahut bahut shukriya for liking my nazm and welcome you to my blog world!

    thnx

  26. mehhekk said

    very sweet

  27. imad said

    slt ca va

  28. imad said

    rohit_tv22@hotmail.com

  29. @Mehek, shukriya dear!

    @Imad, thank you for commenting here but I couldn’t understand your words!

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