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बे ज़ुबान लफ्ज़….!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on April 18, 2007

ज़िंदगी पल भर के लिए
सच्चाइयों को टूटी हुई
सितारों का जामा पहनाकर
राह में खड़ी कर देती है
जहाँ वक़्त के हाथों
ख़ूबसूरत हक़ीक़त ब्याँ होती है!

दुनिया की भरी भीड़ में
धूप छाँव के खेल हैं
जहाँ ख़ुद को अकेला पाकर
धूमिल सी गोधूली में
दिल की ख़ामोशी का सहारा लेकर
आज बोल पड़ा मेरा मन
वो भी बे लफ्ज़, बे ज़ुबान…!

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Ruchi is in Atlanta now. We use to chat everyday but today she suddenly came online in afternoon(india time). She was missing india too much and while chatting with me, she desired to read something new in my blog, so I thought of putting this poem for her in some special way in devnagri. This poem is ‘Dedicated to Ruchi’.

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12 Responses to “बे ज़ुबान लफ्ज़….!”

  1. Ek Ajnabi said

    Hi

    It is better to express the language in its own script so that the beauty of the poem becomes more apparent. Thanks to the writer to make us available, the Hindi version of this poem. We expect now to see Hindi versions of more of your writings.

    I would like to appreciate if one could tell me the exact meaning of these words:
    0. जामा
    1. धूमिल
    What I feel जामा may mean certain skeleton and धूमिल may mean not much clear…

    Keep Smiling Always

    Ek Ajnabi

  2. satyajeet said

    hi ajnabee…

    whenever i read your name, I hear echo of some song… sth like ek ajnabee, hasina se..yu mulakaat ho gayi… 🙂

    word jama means something like pazama.. clothing.. jama pahnakar.. khol.. that covers completely..

    dhoomil you got right… and as you don’t know dhoomil, i dont except you to know ‘Godhuli’ as well. godhuli means sandhyakal, evening ki wela.

    friends,
    satyajeet.

  3. nice poem !!!
    infact best af all i have read written by you.
    short and effective experience of reading.
    this shows your caliber to be an established poet.
    nice way of expressing your feeling with the help of natural assests

    Regards
    ARUN BHARTI

  4. satyajeet said

    oh god

    I was so lost in the poem, that i forgot to appreciate..
    nice poem.
    earlier poems..
    I was appreciating, as others were doing so..
    in between it was motivation..
    but this one !
    well….
    I can’t stop myself…
    kya tum bhi apne poem jaisi ho ..:)

  5. Ek Ajnabi said

    Thank you very much Satyajeet for helping me………and keep on listening the same music track.

    Ek Ajnabi

  6. ruchi said

    Dear Rewa

    i am so very touched by your gesture…
    baar baar type kar ke shabd mita de rahin hoon…samajh me nahi ata kya kahoon…aaj mujhe samajh me aa raha hai ki kyun log jalte hain humari dosti se…kyunki unke paas itni achchi, itni pyari dost jo nahin hai…
    is kavita ke naam ki tarah tumhari dosti bhi to nihshabd thi…kabhi kuchh nahin manga …kabhi koi shart nahi rakhi…bas nihshabd samvedansheel …
    itni sundar kavita , itne sundar shabd!!
    ise padh kar shareer ke jame me naye saanson ke moti loodhakne lagte hain..ek mahakti hawa ke jhoke ke samaan..Rewa, aise hi likhti rahna
    log mere comment ko padh kar shayad mujhe ek sentimental fool samajh baithen magar koi bhi shayad meri jagah hota to shayad itna hi touched ho jata!!

  7. ruchi said

    and Thank you Rewa, for writing such a beautiful poem for me…
    I know my thank may not be enough…

  8. Siddharth said

    Use of Devnagri and Bang-on-Target approach has made it a wonderful creation. Isse jyada jhooti tareef nahi kar sakta.. 🙂

  9. “ज़िंदगी पल भर के लिए
    सच्चाइयों को टूटी हुई
    सितारों का जामा पहनाकर
    राह में खड़ी कर देती है…..”
    अच्छी पंक्तियां हैं। बहुत खूब ।। वैसे तो ज़िंदगी इन्सान को क्या क्या रंग दिखा देती है, कोई नहीं जानता; लेकिन दो पल हम हंस खेल कर गुज़ार लें इतना ही बहुत है । इसलिये अपने-2 विचार प्रकट करते रहिए ।

    दो लफ़्जों की है ये जिंदगानी
    या है मोह्ब्बत या है जवानी……।।

    हमेशा मुस्कुराते रहो
    एक अजनवी

  10. aapse mulakat hoti nahi,hastraten byan kaise karoon?
    sabdon se chirti baten hain jo aapki,sabdon se byan kaise karoon?

    itna kamjor na rahta to aankhe raoushan hoti
    main sagar se khoj laya hota ek adad moti

    aapke sabd hain ki aks ye aap hi jano.
    sochta hoon inko badjuban kaise karoon?

    Regards

  11. Nidhi said

    Sunaai deti hai jiski dhadkan, hamaara dil ya tumhaara dil hai 🙂

    Aap apni best friend ke liye itni achhi poem likhi hen…..kash koi mere liye bhi likh dale.

  12. mehhekk said

    bahut khub rewa,khamoshiyan bhi kabhi bahut kuch keh deti hai.

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