चुपके से…!
Posted by Rewa Smriti on March 7, 2007
अंधेरी रात के
गहरे सन्नाटे में
चुपके से
धीरे धीरे
मेरे क़रीब आकर
किसी ने
मुझसे कुछ कहा!
मैं सहमी
अलसायी
नींद में उलझी,
पूछ बैठी
कौन है?
कोई जवाब नहीं
ना कोई पद चिन्ह
ना कोई परछाई
फिर भी
छोड़ गया
एक निःशब्द सवाल!
मैं कौन हूँ?
मेरा वज़ूद क्या है!
Turning the wheel... 
Sap said
Nice Poem. I really appreciated u!!!!
Arun Bharti said
khwabo ke andhere mein apne wajud ko dhundhti aapki kavita..har kadam yah ahshash karati hai ki mahadevi verma ka janm dhire-2 fir se ho raha hai..!!!
Ashok Seth said
Excellent! keep it up!
Amit said
Andheri raton mei vajood ki talas!
Another beautiful poem.
mayur said
Nice ! Its very touching and full of emotions.It is live! Rewa, All Your Blogs Touches direct To The Heart. Great Keep It Up.
Kamlesh said
Wonderful peotic expression of eternal mystery of life “Who am I and What’s the purpose of my existence” ?.
On a lighter note…I am your bhai and purpose is to remain so.
Nidhi said
Mashaallah bahut Khoob, bahut lajawab poem. khuda ki kasam aap hain lajawab. 🙂
Dr Vishwas Saxena said
Rewa
a good sensuality people may riddle the unnoticed shadow as anything but i would like to belive it was your commitment with your dreams and unfulfilled tasks,so get set and go and start working on your dreamed assignment.Best of luck and lots of hopes from you and your endeavour.with blessings
Dr Vishwas Saxena
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