Turning the wheel…

…..when the blue water plays with the shore to tell something…..

चुपके से…!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on March 7, 2007

अंधेरी रात के
गहरे सन्नाटे में
चुपके से
धीरे धीरे
मेरे क़रीब आकर
किसी ने
मुझसे कुछ कहा!

मैं सहमी
नींद में उलझी,
पूछ बैठी
कौन है?

कोई जवाब नहीं
ना कोई पद चिन्ह
ना कोई परछाई
फिर भी
छोड़ गया
एक निःशब्द सवाल!

मैं कौन हूँ?
मेरा वज़ूद क्या है!


10 Responses to “चुपके से…!”

  1. Sap said

    Nice Poem. I really appreciated u!!!!

  2. khwabo ke andhere mein apne wajud ko dhundhti aapki kavita..har kadam yah ahshash karati hai ki mahadevi verma ka janm dhire-2 fir se ho raha hai..!!!

  3. Ashok Seth said

    Excellent! keep it up!

  4. Amit said

    Andheri raton mei vajood ki talas!
    Another beautiful poem.

  5. mayur said

    Nice ! Its very touching and full of emotions.It is live! Rewa, All Your Blogs Touches direct To The Heart. Great Keep It Up.

  6. Kamlesh said

    Wonderful peotic expression of eternal mystery of life “Who am I and What’s the purpose of my existence” ?.
    On a lighter note…I am your bhai and purpose is to remain so.

  7. Nidhi said

    Mashaallah bahut Khoob, bahut lajawab poem. khuda ki kasam aap hain lajawab. 🙂

  8. Dr Vishwas Saxena said

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    Dr Vishwas Saxena

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