Turning the wheel…

…..when the blue water plays with the shore to tell something…..

Jab chali thee mai…!

Posted by Rewa Smriti on May 24, 2006

I have written  this poem when I came out from ‘Jawahar Navodaya Vidyalaya’ and took admission in to ‘Jawaharlal Nehru University.’

जब चली थी मैं
ये राहें अजनबी थी
मैं अकेली अपनी मंज़िल की ओर,
वक़्त की धारा के साथ
बहती चली,
यादों के गहरे सागर में,
मेरी किश्ती साहिल,
ढूँढ रही थी…!

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4 Responses to “Jab chali thee mai…!”

  1. Ruchi said

    teri kashti ki chinta tu kyu karti hai..
    tera sahil bhi khuda hai aur tera patwaar bhi ..

  2. mehhekk said

    bahut khub,kashti ko kinara mil jayega ek din,manzil dur sahi.

  3. Hmmm….Ruchi tune jo shayari likha hai that is my fav one. luv u dear 🙂

    Dear Mehek, manzil door hi sahi but rahi ko to chalte rahna padega…!

  4. ram naresh said

    aap ko to manjil mil gayi na. par mujhe ek kinare ki talas h.

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