An Ode to a Woman!
Posted by Rewa Smriti on January 24, 2012
Here is a beautiful poem written by my best friend and sister, Ruchi! The poem describes exactly what every woman feels!!! I really liked it. I read this poem over and over again, because I felt touched. I myself sometimes feel just the way her poem describes a woman.
Need a sky to fly, need a river to flow
Need a song to sing, need the light to glow.
I have sorrows, I posses the pains
But I own the legs to run the plains
The eyes may burn, the heart may churn
But with my courage, heads I will turn!
The mountains are steep and the winds cut cold
Yet the “REAL ME” within I hold!!
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Nidhi said
“The mountains are steep and the winds cut cold
Yet the “REAL ME” within I hold!!”
I love it.
awesome poem abt women..it speaks abt d powr of women.
hopefuly mor pepl wil b inspired wid this poem.
tarun said
nice ruchi n rewa di
Shantha Kumar said
is this relevant to these days.. otherwise it doesn’t seem womanly but showing human desire…
sukirti said
@ruchi di…. yet i know u only as rewa di’s best frnd….. but i must say di … that i loved this poem of urs…..plzzz will u teach me how to express ur feelings in just merely 8 line…..
@shantha bhaiya : why ain’t these words relevant in present days????? can u plzz elaborate …
n wats the scene with “it doesn’t seem womanly but showing human desire” ?????
kyun ki aapki likhi baatein meri n rewa di ke samjh mein ni aayi that’s why u owe us an explanation bhaiya..
Dimple Maheshwari said
sach me……shayad me bhi ahin kahana chahti hun…aaur aap bhi…ahsaason bhari rachna..
arvind said
this poem is really heart touching not for women but also that type people who are not able for higher education and from rich family……………work hard and faith on yourself make u success soon……do not be upset.i really thankful di….
roopakm said
Short,simple,sharp….
Ruchi said
Thank you everybody for the appreciation and the constructive criticism
The reason why I had christianed this piece as “An Ode to a Woman” is because I had expressed the heart of the woman within ! Nevertheless, I also agree that I am a human too, so the poem may touch men and women alike..
@Arvind,Shantha thank you again for reminding me of my status as a Human too
-Ruchi
jitendra kumar said
these 8 lines r perfectly written n it describes beautifuly fellings of any such person. ya to o women ya man hi kyu na ho.
reallly awusome
thanq RUCHI di & REWA di.
h.rajan said
its really impressive..
arshad said
lovely n inspirational poem di………………..
VIVEK SINGH said
Awsme line u knw i read two thn i finaly undrstnd the tchng meaning of ths poem.
Aftr readng m also shre my flngs abt girls:-
A girl
One of the beautiful amamzing creation of God
U can see her divinty in form of “MOTHER”.
U can see her care of a “SISTER”.
U can see her innocence in form of “DAUGHTER”.
U can see her warmth in the form of” FRIEND”.
U can see her passion in the form of “BELOVED”.
U can see dedication in the form of “WIFE”.
Wana cnvey ths msg to evry sick prsn who molest girl,disrespect grls nd kill girls.
Thnx
Shalini Priyadarshini said
wht a creativity di? jst awesome… aur pta ni kya bolu…
itne kam wrds me itna kuchh express kiya aapne
AMAZNG
rishi bala said
beautiful words xpressing a beautiful woman…
Day Dreamer said
I wish Shantha Kumar had an answer for this irrelevant comment: is this relevant to these days.. otherwise it doesn’t seem womanly but showing human desire…
It is a human desire and no doubt but don’t you consider woman as HUMAN. She cannot have desires. Only MEN’s are expected to have dreams and desires. Think before you speak is very important Mr. Kumar.
It is a lovely poem and hope we would have got some lovely words from you.
Lopa Sarkar said
Very honest and beautiful poem!
Men think that they are smarter, yet women are the mind masters.