Your silent steps of love!
Posted by Rewa Smriti on November 30, 2011
Lost in thoughts
Swinging in the wind
A silent soul
With ‘a bag of mixed’ emotions
Searches for words
Holding a pen,
Between ‘silent’ lips
In silver light
Recalling restless spirit!
Before you reveal
Your unsaid feelings
Blown in the wind
Touched my silence, I felt
Deep in the heart
So close, so near
Through the passing clouds
While turning the wheel
You whispered
The words “I Love You…”
Yet, you say-
The world isn’t blind
Never fear, no
Just be silent, like a fish
Flow in deep river
For the river is flowing…
And I follow quietly
Your silent steps of love!
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Note: This poem was written on November 26, 2011. It is written for my favourite flower, the love of my life! 
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arshad said
realy lovely poem di…..
Dr Vishwas Saxena said
This poem besides having a lyrical excellence,an inherent rhythm and a very handy tune is doing a great socio- ecological service to fast cruding out world where land acquisition is done for asset building to ignite dominance and hatred!To symbolize status—-,to snatch a free move of air.I ,right from my M.Sc days, very much enchanted by this flower’we called Butea monosperma’in ecological jargon and ‘पलाश’ in poetic rhymes. During our field exercizes I found that this flower blooms in the dry deciduous sub arid and arid regions of Rajasthan when all others flowers dry out owing to onset of summers in late April.It suddenly gives an illuminated look to dry forest as if glitterd with red bulbs!——–this symbolizes this flowers’endurant tendencies to ward of hopelessness and flag a fortune amidst adversities.In todays world we are fast metamorphising ourselves from COGNITIVE BEING TO CYBER BEING.CRUSHED AMIDST HARSHNESS OF LIFE we drag our life to simulated happiness resting on artficial stiumliis!But the very existence of this flower still assures us the glee over the vast stretches of plains where we played joyfully.In many parts of country I saw this flower being venerated religiously too.Palash promises revival,assures survival and promotes hope! All who love palash have a lurking attachment to conserve nature and socialize humanity.Rewa your composition takes me to a journey to my favourite William Words worthworths’ note worthy linings saying
——————–a host of golden daffodills!!!!
Congrats for being in tune with a great poet like him.With my best wishes
Dr Vishwas Saxena
badaltey rang said
Only a person who knows love can express such deep aspect of love so sensitively… I had goose bumps when I read it…beautiful, just like you!
kumardh said
Although I like only Hindi poems but after reading your English poem I think I should start reading English poems also.
Good Work DIDI… Keep it up….
vaise samajh me kuchh aaya nahi…. LOL ..
iamtarun said
hi di nice poem…
di may i ask u a question?
sushil Kumar said
Lovely
Ranjeeta said
Absolutely Fabulous…fabulous piece of writing. Emotion always makes a poem great. This poem is full of emotion that reminds me of your innocent face. You are the most loving person and you have got so much love in your heart for others.
amit kumar said
nice poem……………..with lots of meaning………….
Rewa Smriti said
@Tarun,
Thank you so much for liking the poem. You can ask me any question…Just type!
taru said
hi di …..why u always give so much important to yhe palash?
Rewa Smriti said
@Arshad,
Thank you so much for liking it.
@Kumardh,
Don’t worry Dharm, ye samajhne ke liye nahi feel karne ke liye hai. Lol nahi, you are baklol mere bhai
@Sushil,
Thank you ji
rgds.
Rewa Smriti said
@Dr Vishwas bhaiya,
Most of all, I want to tell you thank you for encouraging me to continue doing what I want. I must thank to you for the words of gratitude I received from you. You have given me so much inspiration throughout the years and always encouraging me to take another step forward. Once again Thanks a lot Bhaiya. And I hope that you will keep supporting me and encouraging me like this in the future too as it always gives me hope and courage to look forward.
rgds.
Rewa Smriti said
@Tarun,
Hmmm…bachche dil ke sachche!
As I mentioned in one of my posts that I am in love with my favorite flower since my childhood. Please click on the link to read about it: http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/04/07/in-love-with/
Aah about Palash…where love is concerned, too much is not even enough. Isn’t it?
I feel, we must make a special room in our life for someone as important to us as ourselves, and we can give a lot just by paying attention to a loved one!
with love,
your didi.
Rewa Smriti said
@Amit bhaiya,
I must extend my thanks to you for your comment and appreciation.
@Ranjeeta,
Thank you so much for always supporting me. I can remember everything dear…everything!
@Badalte Rang,
Thank you very much for your lovely comment! By the way it’s lovely name .
And, Thanks a lot to Rahul, Reva kheta and Satish for liking this poem!
rgds.
taru said
wow di…….. u r seemed soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo romantic.
really r u ?
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Nidhi said
Before you reveal
Your unsaid feelings
Blown in the wind
Touched my silence, I felt
Deep in the heart
So close, so near
Through the passing clouds
While turning the wheel
You whispered
The words “I Love You…”
loved it
Oye hoye..tusi to vaddi romantic-shomantic si ho rahi ho
O ji kya bat hai!!..bohot romantic poem henji.
i think dis is best ever.hindi ho ya english..tusi jan dal dete ho lafzon mei!
Lopa Sarkar said
Awwwww, such a lovely poem. Perfectly expressed. Sooo romantic! It’s so cold here.
Shiwani said
I really appreciate your piece of writing. Great poem.
jitendra kumar said
simply awsome di………..kya bolu…..bas aap to aap hai
)))
lajwab hai aap !!!!