चुपके से चली आऊँगी!
Posted by Rewa Smriti on June 3, 2009
चेहरे पर शिकन तक ना देख पाओगे,
हल्की फुहारों में जब भींगती चली आऊंगी!
तेरे बज़्म में है ज़न्नत, तुम ये समझ पाओगे,
सबसे नज़र बचाके जब भागती चली आऊंगी!
सुलझे रिश्तों के धागे को, यूँ ना उलझा पाओगे,
असलियत बयाँ करने जब हर बार चली आऊँगी!
बहते आँसू में दबी दर्द को, तुम ना पहचान पाओगे,
पिघलती बर्फ की चादर जब ओढ़ती चली आऊँगी!
चाँद की चाँदनी में बैठ, मुझे ना आज़मा पाओगे,
गुमसुम बैठा चाँद के साथ जब चुपके से चली आऊँगी!
rohit said
hi Rewa
lovely poem .. sahi me tum kafi badia likhti ho…..
सुलझे रिश्तों के धागे को, यूँ ना उलझा पाओगे,
असलियत बयाँ करने जब हर बार चली आऊँगी
rishto ko hi uljata raha hai insaan har baar
chota jeevan, per uljaan badi.
asliyaat sabke samne ho to uljaan sulaj jaye
per har insaan aajakal uljaan ko badta hi jaa raha hai…
……………
M Verma said
अच्छी रचना
बधाई
nidhi said
बहते आँसू में दबी दर्द को, तुम ना पहचान पाओगे,
पिघलती बर्फ की चादर जब ओढ़ती चली आऊँगी!
चाँद की चाँदनी में बैठ, मुझे ना आज़मा पाओगे,
गुमसुम बैठा चाँद के साथ जब चुपके से चली आऊँगी!
a vry nice nd b’ful poem.
heart tuching..thnkuji fr a lovly poem frm a sharp nd b’ful mind.
happy birth day to U!!
anupam jha said
All the best! its been more than one year since i wrote the 1st comment on your blog!happy b day….and for everything you are goin to witness in the coming days! I m a die hard fan of your poems!!
Abhiraj Anand said
very nice
Abhiraj Anand said
Happy birthday to you again..hope u had a nice day
anil kant said
bahut achchhi lagi aapki rachna…
परमजीत बाली said
बहुत सुन्दर रचना है।बधाई।
rishibala said
kidher jaane ka iraada hai?
;-p
Dr Vishwas Saxena said
Dear author
an excellent and very brave depiction of feelings.Perhaps now you have attained those heights which I think you very well deserve in your poetry.I right from the very begning sensed a spark in your sparkling poetry and haunt to view its zenith point.Today I very confidently declare that you are the best poet now in the ongoing websites i daily browse.Yes surviving with a smile the pain of parting love yet not succumbing or complaining for is the essence of this memorable poem of yours .i really wish to see this approach in the youngsters of this millenium.I am so happy that you have initiated this new treck.I bless you to be a pioneer of this school of thought.With my profound appreciation to you and all the very best for your forthcoming life
Dr Vishwas Saxena
paavanj said
Respected Rewa,
After read your effective post,
Just want to say that”Very interesting & well written article !“.
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Best of Luck for your next posting!!
-God Bless You….
mehek said
चाँद की चाँदनी में बैठ, मुझे ना आज़मा पाओगे,
गुमसुम बैठा चाँद के साथ जब चुपके से चली आऊँगी!
waah rews kya gazab ka andaaz hai,bahut dino baad dil khish kar diya.behad sunder.
Shrikant said
it was nice rewa..really nice..keep it up and do compile all these poems !!
Santosh K Singh said
I feel its real presentation of my life. realy very nice.
Racial Profiling ?? said
Good Poem!!
TARU said
HI….. REWA DI….. CAN I SAY U DIIIIII…….?FI YES “REWA DI REALLY UR POEM IS SOOOOOOOOOO NICE.
LOVE UR POEM DII….