Comments on: तेरे कितने सवाल…! http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/ .....when the blue water plays with the shore to tell something..... Mon, 16 Nov 2009 08:03:05 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Dr Vishwas Saxena http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/#comment-10812 Dr Vishwas Saxena Thu, 14 May 2009 09:07:22 +0000 http://rewa.wordpress.com/?p=133#comment-10812 Dear Author I dislike any morose,negative and sagging standard of a poet.Why you get on the verge of breakdown by merely changing relaionships? life never ends with treachery of any relationship.And why do you think that it would be a bed of roses only?If you want to walk on the long paths of life than you have to cross thorny roads also.This is a new era which is bringing numeruous changes in course of life!be open and watchful to every happening prepare to behold it and be a winner of life.I in your few earlier poems I felt that you take pleasure in defining your existence akin to a ever flowing river,then keep on raving if would start loving any embankement you will soon restrict yourself into a still lake.Remember you have to prove your role of अखंड प्रवाहिनी ,so no stoping please keep on flowing.yes if tired ever then fall in a big ocean who can magnify your existence from a river to a vast sea.dont feel bad about my harsh but realistic words.Blessings Dr vishwas saxena Dear Author
I dislike any morose,negative and sagging standard of a poet.Why you get on the verge of breakdown by merely changing relaionships? life never ends with treachery of any relationship.And why do you think that it would be a bed of roses only?If you want to walk on the long paths of life than you have to cross thorny roads also.This is a new era which is bringing numeruous changes in course of life!be open and watchful to every happening prepare to behold it and be a winner of life.I in your few earlier poems I felt that you take pleasure in defining your existence akin to a ever flowing river,then keep on raving if would start loving any embankement you will soon restrict yourself into a still lake.Remember you have to prove your role of अखंड प्रवाहिनी ,so no stoping please keep on flowing.yes if tired ever then fall in a big ocean who can magnify your existence from a river to a vast sea.dont feel bad about my harsh but realistic words.Blessings
Dr vishwas saxena

]]> By: Rewa Smriti http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/#comment-1074 Rewa Smriti Mon, 11 Feb 2008 11:35:02 +0000 http://rewa.wordpress.com/?p=133#comment-1074 Hi Satyajeet, thanku for reading my poem! @ kyoki mai jindagi hu.. Zindagi tujhe salaam...! :) So I know, her pal yahan jee bhar jiyo, kya pata kal ho na ho...Waise mujhe koi shikayat and shikwa nahi hai zindagi se... :) Hi Satyajeet, thanku for reading my poem!

@ kyoki mai jindagi hu..
Zindagi tujhe salaam…! :) So I know, her pal yahan jee bhar jiyo, kya pata kal ho na ho…Waise mujhe koi shikayat and shikwa nahi hai zindagi se… :)

]]> By: kyoki mai jindagi hu... http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/#comment-1073 kyoki mai jindagi hu... Mon, 11 Feb 2008 07:32:45 +0000 http://rewa.wordpress.com/?p=133#comment-1073 suno ustaad.... poochhati ho tere kitne sawaal.... ye to nainsafi hai .. prashna bahut purana hai.. kisi umradaraj ko lal rang me dhak dene bhar se wo nai dulhan to nahi ho jaati.. aur koi padi agar safed kapdo me bhi utare....? wo pari hi rahti hai.. puchhati ho .. tere kitne sawaal.. kaha hai koi sawal.. sawaal mai kar rahi hu ya tum.. mai to har sawaal ka jawab hu... ye imtihaan mai le nahi raha... tum de rahi ho.. aur ye rishte bhi tumhare hi hai... mai to kahti hu jeeyo mujhe har pal, har lamhe.. rishto me ya bina rishto ke sukh me ya dukh me khushi me ya gam me koi bhi naam do bas mujhe jeene do kyoki mai jindagi hu.. jano mujhe.. jab se tumhe saanse mili hai.. tab se ab tak.. yaad nahi.. maine kabhi tumhara saath chhoda ho.. par tum to kahti ho.. " mai toofano me chalne ki aadi hu, tum mat manjil meri aasan karo, hai nahi daya sweekar mujhe apna bhi.. tum mat mujhpar koi ahshaan karo" तेरे इस खेल में, ख़ुद का मज़ाक बनाई, पलकें भिंगोई, अरमान टूटे, आह तक ना निकली, ना कोई शिक़ायत, ना शिकवा, पर, कब तक? na sikwa na shikayat? phir ye kya hai.. अब बस भी करो, ऐसा ना हो, तेरे सवालों की ढेढ़, ख़त्म होने से पहले, ख़ुद ही ख़त्म हो जाऊं! bas ab ye julm na karna mujhpar.. chahe aasmaan ki sair ho ya bhookamp ke jhatke.. chahe gulaab ke fool ho ya unme lage kaante.. mai to bas yahi kahungi.. mujhe mat kosho.. mujhe abhi jeena hai... kyoki mai jindagi hu... suno ustaad….
poochhati ho tere kitne sawaal….
ye to nainsafi hai ..
prashna bahut purana hai..
kisi umradaraj ko lal rang me dhak dene bhar se wo nai dulhan to nahi ho jaati..
aur koi padi agar safed kapdo me bhi utare….?
wo pari hi rahti hai..
puchhati ho ..
tere kitne sawaal..
kaha hai koi sawal..
sawaal mai kar rahi hu ya tum..
mai to har sawaal ka jawab hu…
ye imtihaan mai le nahi raha…
tum de rahi ho..
aur ye rishte bhi tumhare hi hai…
mai to kahti hu jeeyo mujhe
har pal, har lamhe..
rishto me ya bina rishto ke
sukh me ya dukh me
khushi me ya gam me
koi bhi naam do
bas mujhe jeene do
kyoki mai jindagi hu..

jano mujhe..
jab se tumhe saanse mili hai..
tab se ab tak..
yaad nahi..
maine kabhi tumhara saath chhoda ho..

par tum to kahti ho..
” mai toofano me chalne ki aadi hu,
tum mat manjil meri aasan karo,
hai nahi daya sweekar mujhe apna bhi..
tum mat mujhpar koi ahshaan karo”

तेरे इस खेल में,
ख़ुद का मज़ाक बनाई,
पलकें भिंगोई,
अरमान टूटे,
आह तक ना निकली,
ना कोई शिक़ायत,
ना शिकवा,
पर, कब तक?

na sikwa na shikayat?
phir ye kya hai..

अब बस भी करो,
ऐसा ना हो,
तेरे सवालों की ढेढ़,
ख़त्म होने से पहले,
ख़ुद ही ख़त्म हो जाऊं!

bas ab ye julm na karna mujhpar..
chahe aasmaan ki sair ho ya bhookamp ke jhatke..
chahe gulaab ke fool ho ya unme lage kaante..
mai to bas yahi kahungi..
mujhe mat kosho..
mujhe abhi jeena hai…
kyoki mai jindagi hu…

]]> By: satyajeet http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/#comment-1072 satyajeet Mon, 11 Feb 2008 07:01:41 +0000 http://rewa.wordpress.com/?p=133#comment-1072 SPEECHLESS.. SPEECHLESS..

]]> By: Rewa Smriti http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/#comment-1048 Rewa Smriti Mon, 04 Feb 2008 15:21:38 +0000 http://rewa.wordpress.com/?p=133#comment-1048 Hi Mr. Deepak, Welcome you @ MBW. aapko meri kavitayen padhkar achhi lagi iske liye bahut bahut Dhanyawad. @Ek ajnabi, thanx for appreciation. katra katra milti hai katra katra jeene do...! Hi Ramesh, thank you very much for your lovely comment and wish you the same. @Amit, thnx for your appreciation and also thank you very much for your kind words. Dear Tanu, welcome to blog world and keep bloging. I will be happy to put your blog link @my blog. Thank you very much for liking my poem. Hi Anurag, thank you very much for spending time from ur busy schedule to read my poem. Hmmm....sahi kaha aapne aur fir sach to sach hai...! Hi Vinay, thank You very much that you liked that part and also thanks for your comment. Again, thanks a lot to all of you for Visiting and Reading My Poems. rgds Hi Mr. Deepak, Welcome you @ MBW. aapko meri kavitayen padhkar achhi lagi iske liye bahut bahut Dhanyawad.

@Ek ajnabi, thanx for appreciation. katra katra milti hai katra katra jeene do…!

Hi Ramesh, thank you very much for your lovely comment and wish you the same.

@Amit, thnx for your appreciation and also thank you very much for your kind words.

Dear Tanu, welcome to blog world and keep bloging. I will be happy to put your blog link @my blog. Thank you very much for liking my poem.

Hi Anurag, thank you very much for spending time from ur busy schedule to read my poem. Hmmm….sahi kaha aapne aur fir sach to sach hai…!

Hi Vinay, thank You very much that you liked that part and also thanks for your comment.

Again, thanks a lot to all of you for Visiting and Reading My Poems.

rgds

]]> By: विनय प्रजापति http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/#comment-1039 विनय प्रजापति Sat, 02 Feb 2008 17:58:51 +0000 http://rewa.wordpress.com/?p=133#comment-1039 अरमान टूटे, आह तक ना निकली, ना कोई शिक़ायत, ना शिकवा, पर, कब तक? I believe this part is far better... अरमान टूटे,
आह तक ना निकली,
ना कोई शिक़ायत,
ना शिकवा,
पर, कब तक?

I believe this part is far better…

]]> By: anurag arya http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/#comment-1038 anurag arya Fri, 01 Feb 2008 12:54:07 +0000 http://rewa.wordpress.com/?p=133#comment-1038 sachmuch saval bhi lagta hai vaqt ke sath shakl badalte rahte hai. ye to sabke saval hai. sachmuch saval bhi lagta hai vaqt ke sath shakl badalte rahte hai.
ye to sabke saval hai.

]]> By: Tanu Shree http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/#comment-1037 Tanu Shree Fri, 01 Feb 2008 08:16:55 +0000 http://rewa.wordpress.com/?p=133#comment-1037 कितना इंतेहां लेगी तू, रिश्तों की आड़ में, तेरे मर्ज़ी पर, बहुत कुछ, हँसकर, ख़ुशी से, स्वीकार किया मैने really very touching....... कितना इंतेहां लेगी तू,
रिश्तों की आड़ में,
तेरे मर्ज़ी पर,
बहुत कुछ,
हँसकर, ख़ुशी से,
स्वीकार किया मैने
really very touching…….

]]> By: Amit http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/#comment-1036 Amit Fri, 01 Feb 2008 07:14:13 +0000 http://rewa.wordpress.com/?p=133#comment-1036 कितना इंतेहां लेगी तू, रिश्तों की आड़ में, तेरे मर्ज़ी पर, बहुत कुछ, हँसकर, ख़ुशी से, स्वीकार किया मैने! This indeed one of the most beautiful poems. Each word express the true feelings with deep meaning. कितना इंतेहां लेगी तू,
रिश्तों की आड़ में,
तेरे मर्ज़ी पर,
बहुत कुछ,
हँसकर, ख़ुशी से,
स्वीकार किया मैने!

This indeed one of the most beautiful poems. Each word express the true feelings with deep meaning.

]]> By: Ramesh Kumar http://rewa.wordpress.com/2008/01/27/%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%b0%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%a4%e0%a4%a8%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%b5%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b2/#comment-1034 Ramesh Kumar Fri, 01 Feb 2008 05:54:25 +0000 http://rewa.wordpress.com/?p=133#comment-1034 Nice Poem Rewa...Really its very nice.... !!!.... May God Bless You....!!!! Nice Poem Rewa…Really its very nice….
!!!…. May God Bless You….!!!!

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