तेरे कितने सवाल…!
Posted by Rewa Smriti on January 27, 2008
अए ज़िंदगी,
तेरे कितने सवाल?
कितना इंतेहां लेगी तू,
रिश्तों की आड़ में,
तेरे मर्ज़ी पर,
बहुत कुछ,
हँसकर, ख़ुशी से,
स्वीकार किया मैने!
तेरे इस खेल में,
ख़ुद का मज़ाक बनाई,
पलकें भिंगोई,
अरमान टूटे,
आह तक ना निकली,
ना कोई शिक़ायत,
ना शिकवा,
पर, कब तक?
अब बस भी करो,
ऐसा ना हो,
तेरे सवालों की ढेढ़,
ख़त्म होने से पहले,
ख़ुद ही ख़त्म हो जाऊं!
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mehhekk said
bahut gehrai se likha hai rewa,zindagi ke anginat sawal hote hai,sahi kaha apne,kabhi kabhi lagta hai bas abhi.aur kisi sawal ka jawab mil gaya tho bhi naya sawal hajir hota hai.shayad yahi jeevan hai.
http://mehhekk.wordpress.com/
Surabhi said
Rewa.. this ismy fav poem. so, u know how much I like it. very nice poem.
Nidhi said
कितना इंतेहां लेगी तू,
रिश्तों की आड़ में,
तेरे मर्ज़ी पर,
बहुत कुछ,
हँसकर, ख़ुशी से,
स्वीकार किया मैने!
Beautiful words.Aye zindagi gale laga le, humne bhi tere har ek gam ko gale se lagaya hai, hai na……
Shubh said
अच्छी कविता है| इस जिन्दगी मे सवाल बहुत हैं| पर जवाब सिर्फ एक है – बुद्धत्व|
Ek Aur Ajnabi said
Looks like you had a refreshing weekend that you came back with a stunner …
Har ek paaon mujhe raundete huye guzre,
Na jaane kaun si manzil ka rasta hoon main…
Rewa Smriti said
Dear mehek, thanku for your lovely comment. Haan tumne sahi kaha hai, yahi zeevan hai….zindagi khud hi ek sawal hai.
Hi Surabhi, thanks dear that you liked it. I can understand and can feel the taste you are having of it.
Nidhi, thanku so much. Hmmm…खुशियाँ और ग़म सहती है फिर भी ये चुप रहती है, अब तक किसी ने न जाना, ज़िंदगी क्या कहती है…!
Hi Shubh, thnx for comment. Appreciating your thought…..jawab achha hai.
Hi Ek Aur Ajnabiji, yea, I had a nice weekend. Thanx for droping by lovely lines. I liked it. ये जो ज़िंदगी है कोई कारवाँ है, कहाँ जायेगी ये खबर कहाँ है!
rgds.
दीपक भारतदीप said
बहुत बढिया कवितायेँ
दीपक भारतदीप
Ek Ajnabi said
अए ज़िंदगी,
तेरे कितने सवाल?
कितना इंतेहां लेगी तू,
रिश्तों की आड़ में,
तेरे मर्ज़ी पर,
बहुत कुछ,
हँसकर, ख़ुशी से,
स्वीकार किया मैने!
तेरे इस खेल में,
ख़ुद का मज़ाक बनाई,
पलकें भिंगोई,
अरमान टूटे,
आह तक ना निकली,
ना कोई शिक़ायत,
ना शिकवा,
पर, कब तक?
अब बस भी करो,
ऐसा ना हो,
तेरे सवालों की ढेढ़,
ख़त्म होने से पहले,
ख़ुद ही ख़त्म हो जाऊं!
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hats off to the weaver of this lovely-excellent exposition …
Katra katra behte gaye aankhon se aansu….
Aur hum kabhi inhen sukha bhi na paaye…..
Is-se badhkar wafa ki saza kya ho sakti hai
wo royen humse liptkar ….kisi aur ke liye
Aur hum mana bhi na paayen ……………. ae jindagi tere kitne sawaal ?
Ek Ajnabi
Ramesh Kumar said
Nice Poem Rewa…Really its very nice….
!!!…. May God Bless You….!!!!
Amit said
कितना इंतेहां लेगी तू,
रिश्तों की आड़ में,
तेरे मर्ज़ी पर,
बहुत कुछ,
हँसकर, ख़ुशी से,
स्वीकार किया मैने!
This indeed one of the most beautiful poems. Each word express the true feelings with deep meaning.
Tanu Shree said
कितना इंतेहां लेगी तू,
रिश्तों की आड़ में,
तेरे मर्ज़ी पर,
बहुत कुछ,
हँसकर, ख़ुशी से,
स्वीकार किया मैने
really very touching…….
anurag arya said
sachmuch saval bhi lagta hai vaqt ke sath shakl badalte rahte hai.
ye to sabke saval hai.
विनय प्रजापति said
अरमान टूटे,
आह तक ना निकली,
ना कोई शिक़ायत,
ना शिकवा,
पर, कब तक?
I believe this part is far better…
Rewa Smriti said
Hi Mr. Deepak, Welcome you @ MBW. aapko meri kavitayen padhkar achhi lagi iske liye bahut bahut Dhanyawad.
@Ek ajnabi, thanx for appreciation. katra katra milti hai katra katra jeene do…!
Hi Ramesh, thank you very much for your lovely comment and wish you the same.
@Amit, thnx for your appreciation and also thank you very much for your kind words.
Dear Tanu, welcome to blog world and keep bloging. I will be happy to put your blog link @my blog. Thank you very much for liking my poem.
Hi Anurag, thank you very much for spending time from ur busy schedule to read my poem. Hmmm….sahi kaha aapne aur fir sach to sach hai…!
Hi Vinay, thank You very much that you liked that part and also thanks for your comment.
Again, thanks a lot to all of you for Visiting and Reading My Poems.
rgds
satyajeet said
SPEECHLESS..
kyoki mai jindagi hu... said
suno ustaad….
poochhati ho tere kitne sawaal….
ye to nainsafi hai ..
prashna bahut purana hai..
kisi umradaraj ko lal rang me dhak dene bhar se wo nai dulhan to nahi ho jaati..
aur koi padi agar safed kapdo me bhi utare….?
wo pari hi rahti hai..
puchhati ho ..
tere kitne sawaal..
kaha hai koi sawal..
sawaal mai kar rahi hu ya tum..
mai to har sawaal ka jawab hu…
ye imtihaan mai le nahi raha…
tum de rahi ho..
aur ye rishte bhi tumhare hi hai…
mai to kahti hu jeeyo mujhe
har pal, har lamhe..
rishto me ya bina rishto ke
sukh me ya dukh me
khushi me ya gam me
koi bhi naam do
bas mujhe jeene do
kyoki mai jindagi hu..
jano mujhe..
jab se tumhe saanse mili hai..
tab se ab tak..
yaad nahi..
maine kabhi tumhara saath chhoda ho..
par tum to kahti ho..
” mai toofano me chalne ki aadi hu,
tum mat manjil meri aasan karo,
hai nahi daya sweekar mujhe apna bhi..
tum mat mujhpar koi ahshaan karo”
तेरे इस खेल में,
ख़ुद का मज़ाक बनाई,
पलकें भिंगोई,
अरमान टूटे,
आह तक ना निकली,
ना कोई शिक़ायत,
ना शिकवा,
पर, कब तक?
na sikwa na shikayat?
phir ye kya hai..
अब बस भी करो,
ऐसा ना हो,
तेरे सवालों की ढेढ़,
ख़त्म होने से पहले,
ख़ुद ही ख़त्म हो जाऊं!
bas ab ye julm na karna mujhpar..
chahe aasmaan ki sair ho ya bhookamp ke jhatke..
chahe gulaab ke fool ho ya unme lage kaante..
mai to bas yahi kahungi..
mujhe mat kosho..
mujhe abhi jeena hai…
kyoki mai jindagi hu…
Rewa Smriti said
Hi Satyajeet, thanku for reading my poem!
@ kyoki mai jindagi hu..
So I know, her pal yahan jee bhar jiyo, kya pata kal ho na ho…Waise mujhe koi shikayat and shikwa nahi hai zindagi se… 
Zindagi tujhe salaam…!
Dr Vishwas Saxena said
Dear Author
I dislike any morose,negative and sagging standard of a poet.Why you get on the verge of breakdown by merely changing relaionships? life never ends with treachery of any relationship.And why do you think that it would be a bed of roses only?If you want to walk on the long paths of life than you have to cross thorny roads also.This is a new era which is bringing numeruous changes in course of life!be open and watchful to every happening prepare to behold it and be a winner of life.I in your few earlier poems I felt that you take pleasure in defining your existence akin to a ever flowing river,then keep on raving if would start loving any embankement you will soon restrict yourself into a still lake.Remember you have to prove your role of अखंड प्रवाहिनी ,so no stoping please keep on flowing.yes if tired ever then fall in a big ocean who can magnify your existence from a river to a vast sea.dont feel bad about my harsh but realistic words.Blessings
Dr vishwas saxena